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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2011 - 06:11 am Title: 2000 Light Years From Home

Resilient little girl that Bess. Sure doing a lot of growing this time around. People can give you all the warnings in the world, but somethings you can't learn until you face them yourself. :)

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! Yeah, I think we all know that telling someone something just doesn't always work - sometimes, most times, you have to figure it out for yourself. Thanks much for reading and stopping in! Will have more soon. -p4s 2011.12.28

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2011 - 07:46 am Title: 2000 Light Years From Home

Alone, something Bess has done for a long time. Fought alone, died alone, survived and suffered abused all alone. Looks like she needs to hit rock bottom to make her way to the top of her journey back home. She is lost spiritually and emotinally with little hope to feel loved. She wants and feels the need to understand where she belongs and fails to have the skills to ask for any help. Sad how she has only ever doubted her self worth and allows others to use her. Hope her soliciting days are over.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! She's getting pretty close to the bottom ... things just have to start looking up for her a bit. She still has a ways to go, though. I think her days of soliciting are, indeed, over ... barring some catastrophe that requires large amounts of money quickly... We'll see. Thanks again for stopping in! {hugs} -p4s 2011.12.25

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2011 - 10:44 am Title: 2000 Light Years From Home

I saw there were two chapters bv I had to sleep. This was such a sad chapter, the first picture did really set the mode. it showed that the chapter would be about her loneliness and sadness. There was some small hope with Wanda but mostly sad. I wonder if she will meet some descendants of her siblings along her travel?



Author's Response: Ok ... just didn't want you to miss it and skip over 'cos I knew I was posting another one today. You picked a good one to go to sleep with, at least. Ever since Buffy met Henry William Hart in the 'wish world' I've thought about how to bring them back into the story - although I honestly don't need too many more characters to keep track of, I think it would be cool. One day my muse will find a way to work at least one of the decendants from William and Anne into the story, I'm sure. Next chapter's up, so you can see who she meets in her travel so far. We will check back with her again later, but next we go back to SunnyD. Thanks much,Magnus! Love hearing from you always! -p4s 2011.12.24

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