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Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2012 - 01:06 am Title: Hungry Heart, Part 2

Glad to see the nurturing side of Buffy when she talked to Annie and sent the food to Bess. I bet that Buffy can make a tee shirt saying “If you met my dad, you’d understand” when she is feeling misunderstood. Nice chapter, your muse is in the background sharpening his tools of torture.

Author's Response: ROFL!!! I love the Tshirt slogan!! LOL! Oh yes, that blue-eyed monster of mine is luring everyone in ... just waiting for the right moment to spring the angst back on you ... just a little closer ... a little closer ... BAM! You'll never see it coming ... or maybe you will, but it won't matter. heehee! Thanks much! {hugs} -p4s 2012.01.04

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2011 - 01:24 pm Title: Hungry Heart, Part 2

I must mention how well you made Buffys thoughts about her father and how she reacts and thinks about what he said. "You are always a child with your parents".

Nice how both Spike and Buffy has sent Bess things without telling the other. And now Spike will make extra money. He didn't want Buffy to go out so it must be something big. I'm a little surpriced that Buffy didn't suspect anything he wasn't that subtle.

Author's Response: You are always a child around your parents, I don't care how old you get, they can reduce you to a kid in an instant. Buffy will come to regret how trusting she's going to be of Spike over the next few weeks ... it will definately be a sore spot for her later. Next chapter's up so you can see Spike's money making plan now. Hope you have a wonderful New Year, Magnus! I always love your reviews! -p4s 2011.12.31

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2011 - 08:28 pm Title: Hungry Heart, Part 2

Can't wait to learn how Bess reacts to receiving the Thanksgiving feast. Your muse and Spike have me really worried so please update soon and thanks for the two updates!!

Author's Response: Hi Melly! You're welcome - it really was just one chapter, my muse just got long-winded and TSR will only take 10,000 words per chapter, so had to break it up. We'll check in on Spike next, then to Bess and see how she spends Thanksgiving and what happens with the mean Buffy sent ... Thanks soooo much! Love hearing from you! It makes my day! -p4s 2011.12.29

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2011 - 07:57 pm Title: Hungry Heart, Part 2

I just love this story so much, even when I'm bawling my eyes out from all the angst. I really hope that Spikes way of making money is not going to be so bad that Buffy leaves him. I'm a little scared.

Author's Response: Hi Michelle! Thanks so very much! I know my muse just loves to torture us and Spike and Buffy so much ... he's quite evil. Good thing he's so handsome or I might have to consider trading him in for a nicer model... ;-) Buffy isn't gonna be happy about what Spike does, however, she's gonna be even more unhappy that he does it without telling her ... :O We'll soon know what it is, but Buffy won't know for some time ... never a good thing! Thanks again for stopping in here - don't be a stranger! You have no idea how much hearing from readers helps keep my muse off the couch! -p4s 2011.12.29

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