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Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2012 - 01:17 am Title: Let's Get Ready to Ruuummbblle!

Spike must’ve been desperate to get his hands on money to help Bess out by taking a loan from the “land shark”. Threatening his family brought out the warrior in Spike risking his unlife to protect them. Funny how Spike and Buffy keep secrets from each other, they really must have good control over their bond to keep the other in the dark. Buffy with the platters of food and Spike with the borrowed money, they are just hopelessly lost to their parental instincts. The fight club Spike fought in is brutal, they are not going to just give the opponents money easily without bloodshed. Love all the thought out details you wrote into the fight club establishment such as the de-conning process. Your muse has to have blood spilt, poor Spike, how is he ever going to explain his injuries to Buffy. She is not stupid.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! Well, it really wouldn't be much fun if they could totally read each other's minds, now, would it? That would just suck. Spike felt terribly guilty about Bess running off, then the bike breaking down, you know him, he *had* to help her. There was no way to get the money elsewhere, Mr. Shark was his only choice. Buffy is in a very trusting place now - I think maybe because of her dad and her realizing how much better a person Spike is than him and she's just gonna trust his his stories about his injuries, which he'll explain as bar-fights. She will come to regret this trust, however. {{cue JAWS music ... dun-dun, dun-dun, dun-dun-dun-dun}} To be very honest with you, the original premise of this *entire* story was the fight club and Spike fighting in UFC type matches to try and get money. The going to get Bess? An excuse for him to give up the Gem ...so he could fight in the club and be able to get hurt or killed ... :O . Of course, once my muse starts writing, things start taking on a life of their own, so he couldn't let the trip to England pass without a nice torture session or two... There is still lots more to come ... {hugs} -p4s 2012.01.04

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2012 - 10:49 am Title: Let's Get Ready to Ruuummbblle!

I didn't think about this way to get money until I saw the chapter name. Buffy won't like this when she finds out, and she will. He can't explain away his damages for more then one or two times before she has him followed. And knowing you more troubles will come from the loan shark.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! Buffy will definately not like it when she finds out. She's definately being very trusting of him and will take his stories and his word as he explains his injuries as bar fights at The Fish Bowl. Perhaps the effect of having her dad visit has made her even more truting of Spike than normal, since she knows just how different he is than her old man. But when she does find out, and she will - ... Well, those are the moments my muse just thrives on. He's evil, as you know. And yes, we haven't heard the last of Mr. Shark...

Thanks soooo much for your continued support and *always* stopping in, even if you don't like some things that I've done. I very much appreciate your POV and do take hints and ideas from reviews when possible. They are like chocolate for my soul and inspiration for my muse. I know I always tell you that I appreciate your notes, and it's always true! Hope you have a wonderful 2012, Magnus! {big hugs} and extra special thanks for all your feedback! -p4s 2012.01.01

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2012 - 12:33 am Title: Let's Get Ready to Ruuummbblle!

Well, dumb idea or not, I hope this actually works out for Spike. I'm tired of seeing them struggle like this! They definitely deserve a break--and so does Bess! This living from hand to mouth bit is getting old, life is tough enough for them without worrying about every penny on top of everything else :-).

Author's Response: Hi Sibb! We'll find out how things go for Spike over the next few chapters. First we're off to check on Bess and see how her journey is going. Thanks so much for your continued support! Reviews are like chocolate for my soul and inspiration for my muse. You have no idea how much it helps to hear from you! Hope you have a wonderful 2012! -p4s 2012.01.01

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2011 - 09:50 pm Title: Let's Get Ready to Ruuummbblle!

I'm still having sympathy pains for Spike. I'm also worried Buffy may beat him up even worse when she finds out about this! Thanks for the update. More soon please.

Author's Response: Yeah, OUCH! Buffy may very well beat him when she finds out ... Got more for ya - a quick update to wish everyone a happy new year! Thanks so much for all your support, Melly! You have no idea how much it inspires me to hear from you! Happy 2012! -p4s 2012.01.01

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