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Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2012 - 12:46 pm Title: Crazy Girl

Well she's a bit crazy, bv that can be good. She get angry fast but forgive fast. Some fights, some angst and some nice moments, a good chapter. I can't help but somehow like the loanshark, you made him well. It was good that Anya came up with a solution so they can use the money. Since they are living real lives they can't suddenly have money without any official reason.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! I'm glad you liked the loanshark. I know everyone hated him at first, with all his threats and jacking the amount Spike owed, but I think he's really a fairly nice guy, just in a questionable business that requires a certain reputation to be successful. Yeah, I try to keep some of the reality of living in the real world in here. I totally hated things in canon like in s6 Buffy had to work double shifts at the burger joint just to survive, but in s7 she worked part time at the school and was fine? And then supported all those Potentials, too? Someone needed to explain that to me! Oh well ... I can handle three headed monsters and bringing people back from the dead, but things like that bother me! heehee! Thanks much for reading and always stopping in! {hugs} -p4s 2012.01.18

Reviewer: Vette Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2012 - 07:15 am Title: Crazy Girl

Glad that Buffy decided to bet on her favorite vampire even though she was mad at him – wise move! The fight club should sell DVD’s of their fights to their clientele, maybe Buffy could use her phone to record the Spike’s next fight and have the slayers go and sell them like Girl Scout cookies to the friendly demon community. In the TV series Spike had a minion video record Buffy when she was fighting, I think he got aroused when he viewed the footage and I can imagine that any recording of slayers fighting would have the same aphrodisiac effects on Sunnydale’s demon clientele. Maybe the girls could wear costumes like cowgirl or waitress outfits to sell the product! I’m totally off topic here, damn your muse for making want to make money for the Weckerly’s! Glares at him. Loved how Anya cooked up a plan to launder the winnings into useable cash - even dragged Giles into it with a gentle nudge. Well, I think that Buffy and Spike need to go shopping for non-flammable clothing for Spike’s next bout. Could he dress like a firefighter for the match? Eyes glaze over thinking of a calendar of Spike wearing different blue collar outfits. Gives your sinister muse a wish list of sexy uniforms for Spike and/or slayers to wear put him to work on that! Fire is operative word in this segment of their lives, a prophecy that state’s “the seer of truth is ‘a daughter of fire” and now Spike’s biggest bout is with Pele who has the power of fire, someone’s gonna get burned! Bites fingernails thinking about it.

Author's Response: God, Vette! I so love your reviews! You have me rolling ... and thinking about sexy uniforms for Spike to wear for a vamp/Slayer calender or video that could be hawked to demons and Slayers! heehee! Of course, it would 'not Village People at all' ... :P And, yeah, Spike totally got hot watching those vids of Buffy fighting! I hadn't actually put the fire references together until you said that - how cool! My muse works in mysterious ways and often leaves me in the dark with his themes... I'm actually just the stenographer... you might've figured that out. It's good to know that even Giles can be bought! LOL! And God bless Anya, ever the pragmatist! Keep biting your nails, gonna make you wait a bit for the fight ... be prepared, of course, for evil cliffies in here too! {hugs} -p4s 2012.01.17

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2012 - 06:18 am Title: Crazy Girl

Thank god that Spike won that, and the loan shark is leaving them alone for the time being. Hope they have a plan to take on the fire demon. And that they are successful with the money laundering. :) Still, seems like things are looking up. Just a little. Update soon.

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! Things do seem to be looking up and I think their problems with the loan shark are over. Now, the Pele demon - we'll just have to wait and see how that works out... I'm sure Anya will be able to handle the money laundering! heehee! -p4s 2012.01.17

Reviewer: gopher101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2012 - 05:06 am Title: Crazy Girl

I bet you Buffy will not let hime out of the house that night, unless Bess comes backs and hands the ring over to Spike to wear for the night.

Author's Response: Hi gopher101 ... Buffy may very well stop him from fighting, especially the more she finds out about this demon and the more worried she gets. The ring won't help him - he won't be able to wear it in the fight, so it's gonna have to just be him in there. No protection. Will have more soon! Thanks! -p4s 2012.01.17

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2012 - 06:12 pm Title: Crazy Girl

I am so glad everything worked out for them this time, but now I'm going to be worried for Spike untill I read about the fight with Pele. I hope he can beat her.

Author's Response: Hi Michelle! The fight with the Pele demon is going to worry Buffy quite a lot ... and the more she finds out about it, the more worried she'll be. There is a definate chance that Spike will not win this... and a small chance that he could dust! {eeeek!} We'll just have to wait and see... Thanks for stopping in! -p4s 2012.01.17

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2012 - 05:50 pm Title: Crazy Girl

Yippee!!! Spike won!! Loved the Shark's office and how Spike got some of his money back from him. Thank goodness for Anya so trouble with the IRS has been avoided. Leave it to your muse to come up with the evil idea of Spike having to fight Pele. Looking forward to learning what Bess has been doing in Cleveland. Thanks for the great (& quick) update. More soon please.

Author's Response: Hi Melly! Wasn't the shark's office neat?! So neat that I may have to use that set again ... I hate to spend all that time creating it and then just toss it away! heehee! What worse for a vamp to fight than a fire demon? Maybe a wood-stake demon ... but fire's pretty high on the list of things Spike would prefer to not face. Thanks so much for stopping in! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2012.01.17

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