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Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2012 - 07:47 pm Title: I'm Falling Down

I say it was a combination of the characters that "saved" Spike. He would have waken with just ritual but Buffy saved his mind. She proved to him that he's in control, the William part balance the demon and can stop it from hurting people. It was a strong scene when Buffy forced Spike to attac and showed him that he has control. Is it time for the lawyer next, or will that come later?

Author's Response: Hi magnus! I think you're right, it was the whole package that did it. The lawyer - I assume you mean the one about the patent, etc (and not LIndsey), will come in the next story, actually. Buffy will definately still pursue that. Thank so much for reading and always stopping in! {hugs}-p4s 2012.02.06

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2012 - 08:00 am Title: I'm Falling Down

This was a whirlwind of a chapter! The coming out of the coma just in time to witness the cereal experiment, the cat in the thick of it, the other cat thinking what a catastrophe and Spike loving every bit of it! One more chapter and then one more segment of their lives shared with us. Is your muse hoping to torture someone else and give our couple a break? Let’s pick on Giles next with books that talk riddles instead of text, act bad and mock him…or bunnies hopping out of thin air at Anya…or frogs leaping at Willow…or food that chases Xander…or demons unionize and declare slayers as abusers – you know Buffy and Spike can do the rescuing of the others for a change. Anyway, loved reading this chapter, sad and sweet just how your muse likes it.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! ... Uhhhh ... on the 'who to torture next' question. No - he mostly likes to torture Spike and Buffy, but he will add Annie in next time, just for a little extra fun. He does have some torture of sorts for Anya and Xander and JJ, but not until the kids are older. Maybe I should mention to him that torturing someone else for a while might be a nice change of pace. Thanks so much for always commenting! It really means a lot! -p4s 2012.02.06

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2012 - 01:38 am Title: I'm Falling Down

Glad he's okay, and that the kids aren't actually facing extermination for there little cereal experiment. And poor Angelpie, at least she will be getting yelled at regularly again. :) Guess they are going to have to go and find a new gem of amara. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BR! They are gonna have to keep working on the Gem problem, most definately. And no, no actual extermination, probably just clean-up duty for the kids ... after Angelpie finishes, of course! heehee! Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2012.02.06

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2012 - 06:37 pm Title: I'm Falling Down

Xander on caffeine – didn’t think anyone could be more hyper than Willow! I just hope Anya doesn’t cause them to be arrested for lewd behavior on some public beach!! I loved the kids eating breakfast in spite of their meal making me a tad squeamish! The children’s reaction to Spike’s appearance was absolutely perfect! More soon please.

Author's Response: Hi Melly! Heehee! Xander was pretty wired! The one trip I made to Hawaii I was up for 24 hours straight due to the time difference from the east coast and everything ... it was very much like that! LOL! Oh, I hope Anya behaves herself and doesn't accost any of the locals ... there are some fine specimens out there! Sorry their meal didn't sit well with you, it just seemed like something a group of kids, left to their own devices, might do ... I recall Dawn did that one time in the show, but having a bunch of them involved is way better! Will try to have the last chapter posted on Friday. Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! Love hearing from you, Melly! {{big Spike hugs for you!} -p4s 2012.02.01

Reviewer: Catrine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2012 - 06:03 pm Title: I'm Falling Down

Loved the reunion between Spike and his kids. An absolutely fantastic journey once again. I really love this series :D

Author's Response: Thanks, Catrine! for reading and stopping in here! I'm so glad you love reading as much as I love writing this series! {hugs} -p4s 2012.02.01

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2012 - 04:37 pm Title: I'm Falling Down

Hmm, they should make the kids clean that up.

Author's Response: LOL! Yes, I'm pretty sure Buffy would agree with you! Thanks, gopher101!! -p4s 2012.02.01

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