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Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2011 - 01:45 pm Title: We Gotta Get Outta This Place

I would threaten to spank your evil, blue-eyed muse for putting us through this but he would probably like the idea and double down on the angst wouldn't he? More soon please!

Author's Response: Hi Melly! heehee! Yep, I do believe he'd be ready and willing for a spanking! :O Will try to keep it coming pretty regularly! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in!! -p4s 2011.10.16

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2011 - 07:26 am Title: We Gotta Get Outta This Place

I was right about them trying to create a "super-Slayer", damn I'm good :-)

They have been trying for a 100 years without sucess, they don't give up easy, do they? They should be careful they could have create the "Overfiend" (I like that term from Urotsukidoji).
It seems like Wes didn't tell them, good, but they are very well informed. I wonder how they got all that information? Taking a tooth from Buffy, horrible but a known way t get a DNA sample. Her friends will not belive her death of course. The timing will make them suspect something.

It can't be to many of the watchers that knows about this it's to dark and extreme. But those who knows stops at nothing. I got this horrible feeling that they will try to breed Spike with his daughter. I hope I'm wrong.

Author's Response: You are good, Magnus! One of these days, I''m gonna lock my muse up so he can't blab all his plans to you! heehee! Well, the next chapter is up, so you can find out how right you are about your current prophecy ... Thanks so much for stopping in all the time! I love hearing from you, even though you always seem to be one step ahead of me! {{hugs}} -p4s

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2011 - 05:16 am Title: We Gotta Get Outta This Place

Lots more for sure. Poor Bess has so much to think about. So not fair to use her as that kind of a pawn after the life she's had. Hopefully the rest of them will have enough sense to know that a car accident would never me enough to take out our two. Update soon!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2011 - 02:00 am Title: We Gotta Get Outta This Place

It looks like Travers and Weatherby have a beat down coming. I hope they don't have to spend a long time in this place.

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2011 - 09:14 pm Title: We Gotta Get Outta This Place

No they will not. Travers underestimates the Scobbies.
Giles will also go to end of the earth for Buffy, he will not take this lying down.
OK i am organizing those townfolf to go after the council.

Author's Response: Hi Gopher101! Thank goodness the townfolk are after the council now and not my blue-eyed, evil, and brutally handsome muse (or me!)!! We'll find out who, if anyone, comes to their rescue! Thanks so much for reading - love it when you stop in!! Always a pleasure! -p4s 2011.10.13

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2011 - 06:42 am Title: Goodbye Blue Sky

Knew it was going too well, there. We did find the girl, and our couple are pretty well skilled at getting out of impossible predicaments. I'm very interested in seeing the reason they are in this mess. Update soon.

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat .... some of the reason's they're in this mess will be revealed shortly ... Let's hope they can get out before anything really BAD happens ... (yeah, right!) ... :O Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2011.10.13

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2011 - 10:06 pm Title: Goodbye Blue Sky

"as that small glimmer of hope she had allowed into the light exploded into dust." I hope you mean that literally. Cause if not, well I have you know I am excellent in organizing mobs of townfolf weilding pitchforks and torches.
ooh, Giles being all shy like is adorable. I cannot believe Buffy meddling would work out, usually it doesn't.
Ooh crap, you are so evil. You just love that angst, don't you.

Author's Response: Hi Gopher101!!! Uhhhhh ... let me think ... do I like angst? hmmmm... yeah, a little! LOL! My muse LOVES to make me cry and I hate to cry alone, so I must share it with you! I'm keeping a look out for townfolk and pitchforks! yikes! heehee! Glad you enjoyed Giles/Olivia ... he is really cute ... hopefully Buffy's meddling will work out for him. He needs someone! Much more to come ... keep the pitchforks handy! -p4s 2011.10.13

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2011 - 06:34 am Title: Goodbye Blue Sky

Did someone give up their mission? Not being met at the airport by the council was really telling of their involvement. Now that they have been captured, can they hope that Giles will find them before anything bad happens to all of them? Glares daggers at your muse for the cliff hanger.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! Hmmmmmmmmmm.... did someone blab?!? We'll find out soon! You know my muse loves those evil cliffies ... and he gobbles up those daggers like candy! heehee! Lots more to come! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2011.10.13

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2011 - 06:25 am Title: Goodbye Blue Sky

I can't say I was surpriced that something bad happend. It started nicely with Buffy making Olivia arrive, nice Olivia/Giles interaction. And then later, trouble of course. I just hope that Giles won't be captured since he didn' expect this. It could have been Wesley who said something, time will tell. The watchers will of course be interested in a Slayer who can be pregnant by a vampire. Do they know she is pregnant now? They mayby will try to breed Buffy and Spike with different Slayers and vampires.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus ... yeah, you knew things had been going tooooo well for tooooo long ... my muse starts shooting spitballs at me if I do that very long! :-0 Some of your questions will soon be answered! New chapter up ... more answers later! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.10.13

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 09:57 pm Title: Come Fly With Me

Giles was so wonderfully Giles in that chapter. I can quite imagine how very non subtle our two were. Lovely interlude before the drama. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat!! heehee! I'm glad you enjoyed Giles! He's a hoot with that dry sense of humor! Let the drama begin .... Thanks so much for stopping in! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2011 - 11:28 am Title: Come Fly With Me

Good picture of a flight attendent, very nice. You also had this intense Buffy picture, it felt like looked straight at me. They had a very good dream. And Giles was wonderful in this chapter. His dry humor, impossible not to like.



Author's Response: Hi Magnus!! I picked that flight attendant out just for you! :-) I love that intense picture of Buffy/SMG too ... glad it had the desired effect! And yeah, you gotta love Giles! I love him bantering with Spike ... ahhhhh ... Spike with actual friends! A spuffy lover's dream... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in!!! You know I love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2011 - 05:20 am Title: Come Fly With Me

Love how Giles educated the blonde duo on mile high etiquette. The brief diversion from economic stresses and upcoming search and rescue mission is nice but are they headed in the right direction? For Bess and Billy, I hope so. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! LOL! Yes, Giles, ever the educator! heehee! Well, the diversions are over ... let the action begin ... We'll soon find out if they're on the right track! Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! Love to hear from you! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2011 - 08:24 pm Title: Come Fly With Me

Ok, the fight between Giles and Buffy funny.

Author's Response: Hi gopher101!!! Glad you got a laugh ... it may be the last for a while! :O Thanks so much for reading and stopping in!! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 11:47 pm Title: My Little Girl

Love that father/daughter bonding.

Author's Response: Hi gopher101!! Thanks so much! Writing Spike/Annie scenes is one of my favorite things to do. They've always had a really special relationship which I just love. Thanks for reading and stopping in! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 08:26 pm Title: My Little Girl

Annie's separation anxiety and fears soothed by Spike was written exceptionally well. Hope that rescue will soon be on the way to Bess. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! Thank you so much, that's very kind of you! I'm really glad you enjoyed the talk between father and daughter ... Spike really loves their kids and has a really special relationship with Annie. The rescue is on the way! Stay tuned! Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! I love hearing from you, Vette! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 07:59 pm Title: My Little Girl

Great chapter. I really like Spike 's relationship with Annie. There is something about Fathers and Daughters.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget! Oh yeah, there is definately something wonderful about fathers and daughters! I'm glad you liked the talk and their relationship ... I love what a great dad he his and how hard he tries, too. He definately treasures the kids ... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2011 - 07:15 am Title: My Little Girl

Smart little Annie. And I give Spike much credit for handling that whole talk, there. Told her just enough for it to all make sense and not got to that place where it really doesn't make any sense. Very curious to see if it really is the council that has these poor vamps trapped. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! (I always type BuffyRate ... then I have to laugh when I think about Doyle and the commercial Cordy had him make... Low rats ...). I love Spike's relationship with the kids. He's really a good dad, doesn't always know what to say to them, but what dad does!? I think he definately handled that well... Now he just has to keep that promise to her ... the one about coming back. :O ... Lots more to come! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2011 - 06:02 am Title: My Little Girl

Well it won't be easy in London that's for sure, and I don't think the dungeon is in the main building. I just hope Wesley haven't told the watchers about the plan. I really liked the talk between Spike and Annie. It was sweet but also points out how hard thisis for the children.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! You could be right ... the dungeon could be anywhere ... seems we found out that the Council has a castle outside of London, too ... never know! And Wes ... hmmmm .... where do his loyalties lie? That could be a problem! Glad you liked Spike/Annie talk ... it's definately hard on the kids to have superheroes for parents! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! {hugs} -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2011 - 02:41 am Title: No More Mr. Nice Guy

They have a lot of things to deal with now. And I do hope they can bring Bess into a world and have her be a nice vamp. Yes dear, there are non evil vamps. Lots to learn. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! Yeah, there is still a lot to learn ... many things to cover. This is turning into a very long story with plenty of angst coming at them from all directions ...Will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2011 - 11:53 am Title: No More Mr. Nice Guy

A lot of sadnes but also determination. If it is the watchers that have her (which I still think) then it's a big secret within the organisation since neither Giles nor Wesley had heard anything. Wesley voiced some of my own thoughts from my former review, what would the watchers get from doing it? Later they need to figure out what to do with the other prisoners, destroy them or rehabilitate them?

Author's Response: Hi magnus! Yes, if the Watcher's have her, it is a well kept secret ... but then, would you really want to advertise that to the population of Watcher's in general? Probably not. They will discuss what to do with the other prisioners and also eventually find out just what the purpose of it all is. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in. Love hearing from you! {hugs} -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2011 - 07:10 am Title: Dreamweaver

Hmmm... Bess, is a vampire. Perhaps still. Could surely get interesting. Maybe it's a bit Fray, twin sister is the slayer, but twin brother gets all the dreams? Just a hunch.

Author's Response: Hi Buffyrat! That's an interesting theory on the dreams! Since Dani/Billy's souls are so intertwined, it definately could be a possibility! Will have more soon ... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: VETTE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2011 - 05:00 am Title: No More Mr. Nice Guy

Bess and Billy talking about Spike keeping his word was touching - hope that Spike is able to do that. The emotions Bess was feeling prove that she is not so damaged that she cannot be redeemed. Since Bess and Dani are practically clones, couldn't they use a location spell using Dani's blood? - or give Billy or Spike a talisman that could be given to Bess in the dream world that can be used to locate her? Your muse better wear a atheletic support guard cause I feel the need to knee him in the crotch for all this angst!

Author's Response: Hi Vette! That's a great idea using Dani's blood to find her, too bad B/S didn't think of that ... no worries, tho, they'll find a way to locate her. Bess definately still has a heart within her, it's just a matter of whether she can let it out into the light or if she's just too frightened about having it broken again to really trust anyone. We'll find out. Oooooooo! No kicking my muse in the crotch! please! ouch! I better run out and get him some thick padding and a cup ... (XXL ... heehee!) The angst hasn't really gotten going good yet. Will have more soon! Thanks Vette! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2011 - 12:22 am Title: No More Mr. Nice Guy

Go Buffy and Spike, stick to your guns.

Author's Response: Let the kicking of butt commence ... Thanks so much for stopping in! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2011 - 12:12 am Title: I'd Do Anything

Poor Bess, hope they can help her.

Author's Response: Hi gopher101, yeah, they really hope they can help her, too! We'll find out ... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in, love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2011 - 05:10 pm Title: No More Mr. Nice Guy

Those Watchers are going down! I love it when Buffy and Spike kick butt!

Author's Response: Hi Sibb! There will be some spectacular kicking of butt to be sure! Hang on, tho ... got some bumps in the road first. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2011.10.03

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