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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2012 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh good - disaster averted. They still have to build trust.

Author's Response: There will be another disaster soon enough ;-) Thankyou for the review!

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2012 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 7

lol oh super amusement. so riley's her gay cousin. lovely! they're funny.

Author's Response: Had to make him gay, couldn't help myself aha. Thanks for reading and Thankyou for the review!

Reviewer: tenebrae Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2012 - 09:38 am Title: Chapter 7

I love that Angel is a (neutered?) territorial cat, and making Riley gay? Brilliant.

Author's Response: Yes I imagine him neutered and over territorial hehe. I had to do it, Riley being gay was too good to pass up. Glad you're enjoying it. Thankyou for the review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2012 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 7

i would really consider getting a beta. the writing is very sloppy, it's a bit distracting at times, just a suggestion. the story would also be better if there was more build up between them, this feels too rushed.

Author's Response: Well I appreciate the criticism and perhaps for my next fic I'll invest in a beta. It may feel rushed but that's just the way I've chosen to write it. Anywho thanks for the review :-)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2012 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 7

Love the part about Angel. LOL!

Author's Response: It's only natural there would be rivalry between them hehe. Glad you liked it. Thankyou for the review!

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