Date: 03/24/2012 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really well done. I can't believe it's your first story. I haven't read a take on it quite like this either, so I think you've got yourself a new idea - not easy! Congrats.
Date: 03/18/2012 - 05:29 am Title: Chapter 2
Very intense. Would love to see more of this one. Would be interesting to see how they healed after that experience, not just in the immediacy. Really liked this dark place. If not, thanks for sharing.
Date: 03/16/2012 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow! Intense, surprising, great chapter. Can't wait to see where it leads.