

Date: 05/16/2015 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow. That started hot, and kind of amusing, and got dark, and really heartbreaking. That takes some major creativity. Well done.

Date: 03/24/2012 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really well done. I can't believe it's your first story. I haven't read a take on it quite like this either, so I think you've got yourself a new idea - not easy! Congrats.

Date: 03/18/2012 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter 2
Dark and wellwritten story. It seems like this could be a turning point for them.
Date: 03/18/2012 - 01:29 am Title: Chapter 2
Very intense. Would love to see more of this one. Would be interesting to see how they healed after that experience, not just in the immediacy. Really liked this dark place. If not, thanks for sharing.

Date: 03/17/2012 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter 2
I got all chipper when I noticed there was a second chapter! Is says that it is complete, but seemed unfinished at the end? So will there be more? I sure hope so.

Date: 03/17/2012 - 06:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for sharing your kink with us! I have read about Spike's member getting ridged before, but it's rare and never in such detail; so kuddos to you! I hope you write more fics; really enjoyed this.

Date: 03/16/2012 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow! Intense, surprising, great chapter. Can't wait to see where it leads.