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Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2012 - 02:50 pm Title: Prologue

I am intrigued as to how Spike and Wes became friends and how Spike knows the baby is Angel's, so please continue. Can't wait for the revelations when Buffy learns of the baby.....

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully it will all start to make sense in the coming chapter, but if it doesn't tell me, and I can rethink it.

Reviewer: nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2012 - 02:56 am Title: Prologue

keep going try giving a back ground on spike and wesley, there are stuff that didn't make it to the screen. maybe spike had snuck around and that way knew who wesley was from before or maybe giles had photos and we all know that he liked to snoop for the good stuff while at giles place, gile could have updated wesley on spke griping about the apparent change in spike but not sure to believe or not so much. wesley has become a risk taker so he is taking the chance. or even darla could have discussed him with wesley.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I'm hoping that I make it plausible how Wesley & Spike got to know each other. You do give me an idea about fixing up that part of the story. :-)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2012 - 12:34 am Title: Prologue

Overall I enjoy the first chapter, but there are a few things really bothering me: 1. Spike and Wesley never met until Season 5 of Angel. Wesley was around in late Season 3, well after Lover's Walk, and was gone by the end of Season 3.
2. I couldn't see Wesley referring to Spike as "his friend." I don't think he even really trusted him until late in Season 5 of Angel, and I still think that it wasn't a really solid trust.
I could see Wesley running to SunnyD to get away from Angel, maybe even trying to find Buffy for help. Also,I can see him accidentally running into Spike.

I'm sorry to be critical, but if you're going for canon, this just doesn't fit.

Author's Response: All great concerns and questions. Considering I wasn't biggest follower of Angel, especially after the whole baby fiasco I'll have to make sure I don't have gaping holes. Hopefully the explanation of how they met will make sense, but it will definitely won't be in cannon. I'll put a warning in the net chapter and re-read to make sure it fits. Thanks for comments!

Reviewer: cj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2012 - 12:28 am Title: Prologue

Please keep going

Author's Response: Thanks :-)

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