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Reviewer: kimi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2015 - 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: o1df Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2014 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2012 - 05:24 am Title: Chapter 3

Kinda cute, has potential, though does need some editing.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2012 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

Mmmh nice twist.
Looking forward to where you will take this story.

Reviewer: Embers and Flame Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2012 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter 3

Great 1st story. I'm gonna go out on a limb and say that you have a thing for Spillffy stories like I do. Who could resist two Spike/Williams? Can't wait for your next post.

Reviewer: Embers and Flame Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2012 - 01:00 am Title: Chapter 3

Great 1st story. I'm gonna go out on a limb and say that you have a thing for Spillffy stories like I do. Who could resist two Spike/Williams? Can't wait for your next post.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2012 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

First off, I do like this story. However, you do need help with your grammar and punctuation, like I said in my first review. Feel free to email me if your interested in my help.

There are reviewers on this site that can be pretty vicious when it comes to grammar. I would hate to see that happen to you because this story has so much potential!

Author's Response: First off thanks for the advice andd Im glad you like it. Im just trying to see if I want Buffy pregnate or on off the twins because of the PTB

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2012 - 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm very curious to see where this is going.

I did enjoy reading it.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2012 - 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1

I like this. It doesn't suck at all, but you may want to get a beta. They could help you with your grammar. If you are interested and you feel you do want a beta, I would be willing to do so.

I do love your idea for this story, very original.

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