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Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2012 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 7

Omg it's soooooooo good. Keep writing ur awesome

Author's Response: Thank you! That's so nice, I really appreciate it! :]

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2012 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 7

Well everyone was bad in season 6 except Tara and maybe Anya, and things didn't go well for them. A better Willow is a good thing.

Author's Response: I know! See, I loved Season 6, it's my favourite, but the characters were just really bad! ... I'm glad you think so! ... Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2012 - 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 7

HA! I was lik, "What the hell? Spike's awake all of a sudden." I should have known it was a dream!

And yeah, can Dawn shut the hell up? I hate her. You write her perfectly! She is an annoying, little *****.

Oh, wait. I just read that that dream was a flashback of a point in the Magic Box. Damn, I really need to rewatch Buffy!



Author's Response: Haha sorry! Damn got everybody's hopes up, I guess! ... Dawn is such a bad character! So whiny!! Thanks, I have two younger sisters who provide wonderful inspiration. :P Actually, the line "Don't pretend that you care Buffy" came from my friend's little sister when she asked her did she have a good day. :D ... Oh, it's not in the show, it's sort of a made-up in-between scene... Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2012 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for a great chapter. I'm so interested to read more.

Author's Response: Aw thank you! There will be much more, I promise! :D

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2012 - 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 7

I figured she was having a good dream. Seemed like a really good one to me! I like Dawn. Life hasn't been very kind to her. First she finds out she is really only a few months old but in the body of a 14 y/o. Then she finds out a crazy hell god wants to bleed her dry. Then the woman she thinks of as her mother dies. Than her actual mother (sister) dies. Who does she have left? A bunch of self involved 19 y/o and a vamp bodyguard. Now her mother/sister is back from the dead and isn't happy about it and she doesn't get to see Spike anymore. And now Spike is sick. Yup bitchy is kinda called for! Willow is helpful and that is weird to me. But I like the story post fast.

Author's Response: Any dream with Spike is a good one! :P ... Yeah, I liked her in Season 5, but once Season 6 started and she stopped being the centre of attention, she started acting out, and being the "Stereotypical Teenager", there's really only so much whining I can take! :P But she was much better by the end of Season 7, she'd grown up a bit. But, I get what you're saying, I just personally find her incredibly annoying. ...Yeah, Willow is being unusually nice for a story I'd write. I hate her in this Season, but I felt like putting more of her in... Thank you! I'll try! :D

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