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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2012 - 06:52 pm Title: Come Undone

Good chap. Like that it looks like Buffy's asking to have her needs met... it's healthy, hope she keeps that up. Hard to do when you're grieving, especially when you're feeling guilty.

Couple of notes:
"they’d laid together" should be "they'd lain together"
and Spike saying "its time" should be "it's time" if he means "it is time...." That is what he means, yeah?

Author's Response: You got me there, these are the first of your issues I identify as actual mistakes. Unfortunetly I don't have a beta so I can over look the odd thing when I'm tired.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2012 - 05:13 pm Title: Come Undone

Seems everyone is a bit broken at the moment because of Joyce's death.

Author's Response: I think broken is a very good word, to run with the metaphore I think everything needs putting back together after something like that happens, and it isn't always easy, and the pieces don't always fit the way they were before...so we'll just have to see!

Reviewer: Albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2012 - 01:39 am Title: Come Undone

Before I read these new chapters, I read the original story to catch up to who these characters are. Just as they were finally getting themselves together, in life and love, death intervened. I like what I've seen here so far, the dealings with grief and all the formalities around it. I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you, hope you continue to like it!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2012 - 11:46 am Title: Come Undone

Spuffy conversation was heart felt. I enjoyed this chapter. I'm really looking forward to the next.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, the next chapter is getting polished as we speak!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2012 - 10:39 am Title: Come Undone

I read the other story again and I'm So glad you decided to write a sequel. I love it So far. I hope you update soon

Author's Response: Thank you hopefully have an update beginning of next week :)

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