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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2012 - 07:40 pm Title: Breathe Underwater

Rough, but well-written scene... they all need some therapy!

Notes:
"…Buffy forgot all about why her and Spike had come here in the first place." Should be "…why she and Spike…"

"… when she wasn’t even passed this stage yet?" Should be "past"

Author's Response: I except the passed one, although confused about it. However again the she/her thing is on purpose (see other comments).

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2012 - 07:11 am Title: Breathe Underwater

I know what it's like to have panic attacks. I feel So bad for all of them. I love this story.

Author's Response: I used to have them too, which is why I glossed over it a little as its not a pleasant thing to remember, but I tried to describe how I felt briefly. I'm glad you like this story, that's a lovely thing to hear! I hope to post an update soon, but at the latest this weekend!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2012 - 11:58 pm Title: Breathe Underwater

Dawn is reallu taking the death of her mother the hardest. I hope that either Spike or Buffy or Giles says the right thing soon. Because they all need eachother. Poor Giles is drinking himself to death.

Author's Response: If you keep reading there will be a little hope for Dawn soon, but unfortunetly there are more downs coming with ups so its not smooth sailing for any of them!

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