Date: 12/03/2012 - 09:04 pm Title: I'll Be Yours
Oh, bother... and things had been on a good arc. Well, maybe this sets up the catharsis they all need.
Quibbles: A few punctuation errors, and a "laid" that should be "lay" (the past tense of lie), and a "scrapping" that should be "scraping."
Date: 09/19/2012 - 10:37 pm Title: I'll Be Yours
Holy Heck, that was so f'ing hot. You're a wonderful smut writer. It was sexy and romantic and....gah...seriously need my hubby to come home. Too much information?
Really good cliff you have, too. What is Dawn going to think?
I haven't stopped reading, just been busy!
Author's Response: Lol I'm glad you enjoyed the Chapter as much as you did! Lovely reviews from you so far :) x
Date: 09/11/2012 - 04:43 am Title: I'll Be Yours
Ha! Love the surprise ending, cant wait for the next update. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you, another update coming at the end of the week!
Date: 09/10/2012 - 06:00 am Title: I'll Be Yours
I thought it would be Dawn. That was an evil cliffhanger though.
Author's Response: I do like to be evil!