Date: 12/03/2012 - 10:07 pm Title: You Don’t Care About Us
Yes! Want to hit them hard! Oh, feelings, so much easier to run away from them! -sigh-
Quibble: I think the "laid" here needs to be "lay."
Date: 09/22/2012 - 08:17 pm Title: You Don’t Care About Us
I don't think Spuffy ending things will even help with Dawn. I can understand where both of them are coming from.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you can see where they're coming from. I think often what we think will help doesn't, but its tricky to know what the right thing is and I hope I showed that no one seems to have anything clear just yet.
Date: 09/21/2012 - 12:43 am Title: You Don’t Care About Us
Could you please tell me what the italics are? I'm guessing it's a song poem... I do like it in the story. Would you please put it in the authors note on where it's from just to appease my curiousity. Thanks :-)
Author's Response: The italic lines that seperate the sections are song quotes (sorry if you had read my first story its explained and I forgot to put a note in this one anywhere, so I will do so next time for everyone!)...basically both this story and the first one are named after Placebo songs, ever Chapter in each is also a Placebo song and the italics are quotes from the songs (so if a particular line interests you you can look to the Chapter title for the song name). x
Date: 09/21/2012 - 12:36 am Title: You Don’t Care About Us
I really enjoyed Dawns POV in this chapter. Like I said, spuffy really need to worry about their own feelings right now. It looks like Dawn has Janice right now and she can stay and cool down with her.
I do want to hit Buffy over the head. She can be so bipolar. I'm looking forward to the angst that will come up because of this chapter.
Update soon.
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can :)