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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2012 - 11:03 pm Title: Battle For The Sun

Ugh.. so sad. Tears on my cheeks.

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2012 - 04:36 pm Title: Battle For The Sun

I'm sorry you are feeling depressed. I understand very well what that's like. I'm glad that Spike told Dawn his side of things. Maybe she will eventually come around and accept Spuffy together. I feel really bad for Buffy. She really needs to admit that she needs Spike as much as he needs her. I feel bad for Spike too because all he wants is to be with Buffy.

Author's Response: I think they're all feelings low, but I swear I planned it this way its not just because I'm feeling the same lol...one thing I am in control of is this story and things will turn around :)

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2012 - 01:14 am Title: Battle For The Sun

I love the honesty of Spike's words in dealing with Dawn. Not meant to be hurtful. not apologetic. Just there. And his goodbye to Buffy. My heart was breaking for both of them. I was literally tearing up. Great writing.

Author's Response: Aw the evil person in me loves that you teared up! Thank you for the review, I worked really hard on the Spike/Dawn talk so I'm really pleased people like it! All the reviews have certainly put me on a good start to the day!

Reviewer: Albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2012 - 10:35 pm Title: Battle For The Sun

I loved this chapter. I loved how Spike just cut right through it all and how honest and unapologetic he was. I liked that Dawn was finally trying to listen and not just reacting. And I lived that reality and the importance of her own emotions is finally sinking into Buffy's grief-stricken mind. She's getting it and I don't think it'll be too late when she is able to reach back for Spike.

Also, sending you some good vibes and hope that you have a better week ahead.

Author's Response: I like to see Spike as the insightful one, in Protect Me From What I Want he made his mistakes, but he's the eldest and here I tried to show he stepped up and realised he's the one with the most knowledge and life experience so he should try and help her see whats happening. Thank you for the good vibes, I just wanted to let everyone know why I wasn't writing as I have been lax with it, but everyone's been so nice about it I'm feeling the vibes and its lovely :)

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2012 - 09:27 pm Title: Battle For The Sun

Dawn so needed to hear that. I understand that her mother died, and I really feel for her. But she needed someone to talk straight to her and let her know the world doesn't revolve around her. People have lives that don't involve her and she needed to know.

Author's Response: I think that was one of Dawn's main problems in the series, she never really got over her jealously of Buffy being the centre of things, so i sort of transported that part of her personailty into my story. But I'm also trying to fix her, whereas in the show/comics I don't think she's ever grown up or had this said to her I just couldn't leave without straightening her out!

Reviewer: Crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2012 - 03:49 pm Title: Battle For The Sun

Broke my heart. I really don't know who I feel for more. Great writting, but sad chapter. Now, take care of yourself, relax a bit....and if it's not too much trouble, Straighten them all out soon. :-)

Author's Response: I'll do my best...writing is one of the most relaxing things I do tbh, if I could do nothing else I would so now I've been told to relax I think I'll make the time to write more :)

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2012 - 01:43 pm Title: Battle For The Sun

Tugged my hearts strings? Yes you did! What Spike said to Dawn was perfection. He put her in her place in the nicest way possible. Why is Buffy being so stubborn? Why won't she tell him not to leave? Please update soon! I'm hoping she goes to the airport to stop him!

And feel better. Sorry you're depressed and stressed out.

Author's Response: I did spend a lot of time writing the Spike/Dawn conversation, editing and re-editing before I wrote anything else in the Chapter so I'm glad it was well received! I'll try and update soon, I'm actually pretty happy with the next Chapter so I won't have to slave over it like this one, means my update shouldn't be too long away!

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