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Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2012 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter 5

...and here he is! William to the rescue! I loved it!
Will she see him again at Concentrico... best I set to find out :D Good thing there are so many chapters ahead :D yay!

Author's Response: That is the one thing with reading a new story that already has numerous chapters, no waiting! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2012 - 03:25 am Title: Chapter 5

Ahhh... William. Yum. May not be exhibitionists yet, but I see much potential. And much to learn for both of them. Such fantastic lead in. Can't wait to see where this goes. Update soon!

Author's Response: Nope, not peeping Toms quiet yet, but it's still earlier! I'm so glad you are enjoying, more Wednesday!

Reviewer: rene Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2012 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 5

LOVE IT! Please keep updating! I'm really excited to see where this story goes

Author's Response: TY, rene! Welcome to my little corner of the world. Have a seat, sit back and relax, cause the fun has just started! More on Wednesday

Reviewer: Abigale Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2012 - 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 5

Hey, BBE. I'm writing this review on behalf of my kitten that is always perched on my shoulder when I'm reading your story. She usually starts purring, so I'm guessing that she is a very smart cat, that can not only read, but she knows very talented writing when she sees it.

*meow*

-sallyntmare- :-)

Author's Response: Awww, so sweet! She is a very smart kitty, especially choosing an owner like you! Abigale, tell your mommy to give you a nice bowl of warm milk for me.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2012 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 5

I'm back to continue my review. I love your Spike characterization, so much that I added it to the nomination list. He is already the confident Spike with the infamous swagger that I love. Perfect. The Spuffy meeting for the first time and the dialogue was done so well. xx

Author's Response: Welcome back!! I'm so flattered, even after such a short chapter and minimal dialog, you are loving my Spike(William) Thanks again for your nomination, you are far too kind!!*big huggers*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2012 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter 5

I'm still here. :)

Yay we finally meet Spike. And the attraction is definitely there on Buffy's part. Dreaming of him so soon huh? Not that I blame her.

Buffy is creeped out by Sebastian it seems but is drawn to the voyeurism watching him and Quinn.

Can't wait for more of Spike and his back story and Buffy's loss of control.

Enjoying. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI!! Big time attraction here and it will only grow! Yeah, Sebastian is kinda creepy/sleezy. More will be coming next Wednesday.

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2012 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 5

I happy to see Spike. Now I I can't wait to find out more about him.

Author's Response: I knew you were waiting, Jaime. I hope his intro was good for you! Now he's here, you'll see much, much more of him!!!!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2012 - 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 5

Hey, there. I'm enjoying this, thanks! Please keep posting. :)

Author's Response: Thanks IT. In spite of how strongly I feel about my writing, I still have that small part of me that is very insecure about it and the lack of/minimal reviews. I know I shouldn't let it get to me, but it still does. Thank you for letting me know you're still here

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2012 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 5

well, that answers my question of if the last guy was Spike. The man in this chapter is most definetly Spike!!

and what readers would not still be with you? how can you start reading a bbe story and just stop? its blasphemy. my phone is dying so ill review more later.

Author's Response: *blushing* Yuppers, she has NOW met Spike (William) Things will be getting interesting from here on out. As for blasphemy, don't rightly know. Either way, I always know my sallyntmare always puts a smile on my face! :)

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