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Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2012 - 02:44 am Title: Chapter 8

Also reminded me of this incredible film I think you might like, called, "Queen Margot." The main character goes out in a Venetian mask to take a lover, because she doesn't want anyone to know who she is.

Author's Response: I've never seen this movie either. However, Venetian masks were used for many frowned upon behaviors.

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2012 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 8

I love all the detail about the masks, the striking imagery and potential symbolism of Sebastian's mask. The mood of this story is evocative and heavy. You're doing an incredible amount of world-building here and it makes the tale that much richer. It makes me feel the same way I did when I was watching, "Eyes Wide Shut," that something intensely ominous was just around the corner, something so much worse than what we are being shown.

Author's Response: Thanks for your in depth review, minx. I feel setting the scene is an important addition to building the feeling of a story. I've actually never seen "eyes wide shut". You are accurate in saying something ominous is coming.

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2012 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 8

Ahh.... Venice... Not too far from where I live! =) I loved this chapter! I loved the scene with William as he steals her away from Sebastian. Poor Quinn.. I hope she isn't in love with the guy!

Author's Response: I'm so excited you liked this chapter. I was slightly wary since it was Quinn and Sebastian getting groiny, but it was really important catalist for everything that came and will come after

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2012 - 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 8

I gotta admit. It was hott the way Sebastian was trying to thrall Buffy into coming to him and Quinn. I wouldn't mind that, as long as William was invlolved! Maybe a foursome is in the plans? O:-)

Author's Response: No, there will be a lot of things but Buffy being in an "any"some is not in the plans. As you saw in this chapter, William wants her all to himself

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2012 - 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 8

I adore you so much. That was brilliant. I did imagine some of those things, but I could never enter the talented mind of BBE completely. It was filled with lovely surprises. Quinn is definitely in a thrall. Bad girl was banging Sebastian in the middle of the club.

While I was reading, my living room transformed into the club. I was a creep hiding in the corner and watching from a far. I always get sucked into your chapters. Only you can do that for me.

I'm anxious to read what William has planned for Buffy. Elizabeth is loosing site of her true identity. I think she'll like being Buffy a heck of alot more :-) xx

Author's Response: No, Ms. Sallyntmare, I adore you. You've been a constant supporter of mine and I can't put into words how much this means to me. Yes, Quinn is in deep. As for you a "creep hiding in the corner"...LOL!!!!! I don't think of these people as "creeps". Everyone has their own "thing" and I think it's great when they go for it. As for being sucked into my chapter, I'm beyond flattered. I hope you like the remaining chapters as much as you seemed to like this one. Thanks again for you support and being an all around awesome lady!!! Big huggers!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2012 - 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 8

So glad William saved her from Sebastian. Gotta say that when you're that much under Sebastian's thumb, perhaps that is why you miss out on William. More fun for Buffy. Can't wait to see what he has to show her. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: That might be true, but did you really want Quinn and Buffy fighting over William? More will be coming next Wednesday. Thanks so much, BR, for reading, enjoying and reviewing!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2012 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 8

Wow...really intense chapter, I felt like I was there in that room.

You had me worried at the end tho, I thought Buffy would go to Sebastian.~shiver~ Thank God William was there to rescue her.
And now I think Sebastian will try something more sinister on Buffy maybe? he definitely hates William and he doesn't seem the type that gives up easily..

Can't wait for more, it's getting more and more interesting now.:)



Author's Response: Thanks so much, AMI. I try to put what's in my head onto the screen. I'm so glad it puts you there, not overwhelms or takes away from the story. Like I said before, Sebastian is a McCreeper. More will be coming next Wednesday and yes, now things are really getting interesting!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2012 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter 8

Looking forward to more!
Thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: No, thank you for reading, enjoying and reviewing, IT!!! It means a lot!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2012 - 10:34 am Title: Chapter 8

I knew Spike would rescue her. Things really are heating up. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks for continuing with this story, Jaime. Yes, things are really heating up now!!! More next Wednesday!

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2012 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 8

Feel like Buffy's fallen down the rabbit's hole and it's gonna be a crazy ride. Seems to me William is protecting her w/ a dash of setting up his own plans..... and I gotta wait till next week, huh? Oh well. It'll be worth it.

Author's Response: Super perceptive, crazylife!!! William did protect her, but how much of it was for his own benefit? Yeah, next week...hope to see you Wednesday!

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