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Reviewer: fyreburned Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2014 - 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 22

Hey, gal,


I'm posting from my cell, so I hope TSR lets me leave a review (& doesn't "eat it" when I get to the 'enter the captcha' part). I'm just loving this fic & have been reading along the whole way. If I didn't review previously, see reason above; and I'm just still learning this Galaxy S4 thing. 


I kinda had thought that Buffy might've gotten TOO wrapped up in things, and very well might've lost her way. After that "Reality Check" with 'Dawn/Demon?', it was good to see Buffy back on the right path to getting her priorities straight, and back on a path fo fighting for "The Forces of Good". Something tells me EVIL will be pulling out all the stops ahead to try to get her back. And William F. Allen, F.allen one as he is (but although of beautiful countenance, is he THE F.allen One?) could  and probably IS a weak spot for Buffy. Am I warm on this one? She pretty much implies in her thoughts on the plane that she is going after him for information that she believes he has. I'm concerned about her return to Concentrico. All.The. Stops.---see above. 


If WAS keeping up with the kind/ type of SINS, Punishments, & HELLS (OK, blame the film "SE7EN", and the classic " Dante's Inferno", 'k?), but lost count somewhere along the way by reading it in chapters, rather than straight through.


THIS fic of your grabs you by the seat of the pants and MAKES you read it! Wanting more, gal! 


BTW, are you going to publish this when you're through with it?



Author's Response: Hey lady! Thank you for taking the time to review. You really made my day, fyreburned!

Buffy was really in deep there for awhile (can you really blame her?) but she has found her way back. As for being who is the 'fallen" I can't really say. Not yet. I promise, it is coming very soon and EVERYTHING will be revealed. You've come so far you can wait just one more chapter before the big reveal, right? Right.

Side note: I absolutely love, love, love Se7en. One of my absolute favs.



*blushing* I'm so flattered you feel this fic is THAT type of fic that drags you in and won't let go. Yes, my plans from the very beginning was to publish (or try) this fic. This is my baby and when she's grown up I'm going to try sending her off into the world. keep your fingers crossed for me!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2014 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 22

William did something to Gil. Looking forward to the confrontation of him and Buffy! Onward to the club! :-) PS. I'm so glad you have your muse back. Makes me happy!



Author's Response: I promise, all will be revealed soon my pretty! ;) I'm so glad my muse is back too! Thank you, B, for being a constant supporter of my story and of me, as a friend and as a writer. I can't tell you how much it means to me. <3

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