Date: 11/17/2012 - 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 11
I liked Spike's last statement alot. It was very Spike-like. I think you're right in having them not fully trust Spike yet; it is very believable.
Author's Response: They've all been told since the beginning that vampires can't be trusted. And Angel really did a number on them. So I couldn't see them all jumping on the Spike is good wagon right away. If anything the LA team would be the ones who would. Their world is more shades of gray then Sunnydale. Besides Spike did betray them at the end of season 4. It'll take time.
Date: 11/17/2012 - 11:27 am Title: Chapter 11
Nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 11/17/2012 - 09:34 am Title: Chapter 11
You do wonder why Spike even bothers. Gile's is supposed to be a scholar, but his deductive skills are abysmal. At least Buffy believes in him, for now.
Author's Response: Two words, "Love's Bitch" I think Spike is incapable of giving up or at least it takes a 100 years before he does! When has Giles ever thought clearly when it comes to Buffy?
Date: 11/17/2012 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter 11
Nothing is ever enough with those people, I don't know why he bothers. It pisses me off that they can even think he'd give up dawn after risking his life to save her and Joyce. Buffy doesn't even seem to give him much thought, I'm not seeing a possible romance between them to be very believable.
Author's Response: Well they are a little thick sometimes. But give it time.