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Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2012 - 09:40 pm Title: Stave Two – The First of the Three Spirits

Well done. Seing her past christmases made Buffy think about how her past has created the person she's now. It was an interesting parallel between her and Angel about not wanting to live in the world. Seing William and Liam made her realize that vampires keep some of what they were. And that a soul doesn't stop you from doing bad things.

Author's Response: Thank you. I wanted to show Buffy that a lot of the human personality seems to carry forward into their vampire selves so I'm glad that came across. :)

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2012 - 02:54 pm Title: Stave Two – The First of the Three Spirits

I think Buffy missed the importance of her dream when she was a kid. A blonde man with golden eyes? Hmm, could it have been Spike? Her father was a jerk and it had nothing to do with her or Joyce. Some men just cheat. If course Buffy would think Liam had been a saint and becoming a vampire had turned him into a murdering bastard. I wonder why she thought that. If that was actually the case then wouldn't Spike have gotten the same consideration? But no Spike had told everyone he was bad before he was turned so he just stayed the same when he got turned? But Angel (Liam) did a complete turn around? Just goes to show the prejudice that Spike had to fight against. Angel could never do wrong, human or souled vamp. Spike could do no right.

Author's Response: I'm happy you noticed the dream! :) I figured that as a Potential she would have had Slayer dreams even at an early age. She should have given Spike the same consideration as she did to Angel and she was so biased by the soul after Angelus that it was a real shame.

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2012 - 02:42 pm Title: Stave Two – The First of the Three Spirits

This is a great chapter showing Buffy's past that really fits into the show. I love she is seeing Spike in new eyes.

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Reviewer: SeaPea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2012 - 04:46 am Title: Stave Two – The First of the Three Spirits

Very interesting. You're doing very well with this.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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