Pretty cute story but trite. Moved a bit too quickly to be believable or have real drama. Several grammar errors.
Grammar errors (there are a couple of "yours" here that should be "you're." And Buffy sounds British. :-)
I like it. But it feels as though there is a missing scene between the kiss and going on the date? One minute she's running saying she was bored & the next agreeing to go an a date? Am a missing a section?
cant wait to read more. (:
An emotionally damaged Buffy. I like it. Loved the kiss and her reaction. Spike will need to prove to her that all men aren't the same. Looking forward to more.
Cupboard is a closet, right? Sorry!!
I like your writing style. Dialogue is good.
Great chapter ! I hope you'll update soon :)