Reviews For A Second Start

Name: ScarlettDuck (Signed) · Date: 11/16/2014 - 05:03 pm · Chapter: New Beginnings
Pretty cute story but trite. Moved a bit too quickly to be believable or have real drama. Several grammar errors.

Name: ScarlettDuck (Signed) · Date: 11/16/2014 - 04:57 pm · Chapter: First Impressions
Grammar errors (there are a couple of "yours" here that should be "you're." And Buffy sounds British. :-)

Name: Titchie (Anonymous) · Date: 03/31/2014 - 07:19 pm · Chapter: The Date

I like it. But it feels as though there is a missing scene between the kiss and going on the date? One minute she's running saying she was bored & the next agreeing to go an a date? Am a missing a section?

Name: spikesgurl1 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/2013 - 12:12 am · Chapter: The Kiss
cant wait to read more. (:

Name: sallyntmare (Anonymous) · Date: 01/04/2013 - 06:27 am · Chapter: The Kiss
An emotionally damaged Buffy. I like it. Loved the kiss and her reaction. Spike will need to prove to her that all men aren't the same. Looking forward to more.

Cupboard is a closet, right? Sorry!!

Name: sallyntmare (Anonymous) · Date: 01/04/2013 - 06:22 am · Chapter: First Impressions
I like your writing style. Dialogue is good.

Name: Lucy (Anonymous) · Date: 01/03/2013 - 10:53 am · Chapter: The Kiss
Great chapter ! I hope you'll update soon :)

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