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Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2013 - 07:10 pm Title: I Kissed a Girl

I really loved the scenes with Buffy and the Bot and I agree with the Bot that they need some theme music!! This was a great chapter and this is coming from someone that makes every effort to avoid threesome fics. After reading your warning I think I may have to skim over the next chapter while peeping through my fingers.

Author's Response: Hey, Melly! They do need some theme music! Hmmm ... I went to the Foreigner concert tonight and HOT BLOODED keeps pounding in my brain right now, although 'HEAD GAMES' made me think of S6 canon-Buffy. Anyway - sorry - I'm totally distracted by that concert. I really don't think the next chapter is that bad as far as being super-slashy, but there is some with just the two girls and Spike kinda ... directing, but also some funny bits in there too and some angst at the end. That'll be the end of the threesomes, at least for a while. I might have more much later, but will warn you if I do. :) We do need to work on that theme music when I can hear again ... :P Thanks for reading and stopping in, Melly! Love hearing from you always!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2013 - 10:19 pm Title: I Kissed a Girl

So good. I liked that you showed a little of their new life and that the Bot and Buffy are BFFs lol Good Lord that dessert is too much. Who the hell pays a grand for a sundae? Oh the rich and their over the top ways. :)
Loved the talk with BB. OMG she's too funny. And I love that Spike has taken her to the sex shop so many times. Oh I love our pervy, horny vamp. ♥♥

The threesome was sweet somehow...didn't squick me out and I'm not usually a fan of G/G action, but with the Bot it's different ya know? I guess cause she's not a real person and it's like Buffy doing it with herself (which is kinda weird anyway, and yeah Freud would have a field day) It's not like that nonsense in the comics with Buffy screwing a girl who was in love with her, when she knew she wasn't gay and didn't love her back.Urgh.

Buffy sure doesn't know Spike if she thinks he's gonna be happy with the Bot if she leaves. Right Buffy. Spike will chase her to the ends of the earth Bot or not. She's kinda dumb, but at least she is trying to leave Spike with someone/thing who loves him.

Uh Oh is Spike in love with BB too?

I'm going with some other diabolical plot twist © . Your evil muse scares me, even tho he's adorable and blue eyed. ;)

Loved it! ♥

Author's Response: Hey AMI! I'm glad I got across that Buffy and the Bot had actually become decent friends over the time together. Honestly, when my muse was like: 'Let's do a G/G/B threesome' I was going ... but ... but ... no! I don't want Spikey sleeping with anyone but Buffy! Plus, who would Buffy share him with? Thus ...the only logical answer: double Buffy! LOL! And the Bot has worked out wonderfully! I really like her. That was actually a surprise to me. heehee!

Oh yes, he's a perv. I *love* how much a perv he is and how he's turned Buffy into one too! :P

Yeah, I started reading the comics recently and that was just strange with that other Slayer (Who's name I no longer recall - can I just say I find all those Slayers just as annoying as the Potentials in S7). Of course, Buffy made *lots* of really bad sex decisions in the comics! Let's not go there!

Buffy's feeling extremely conflicted - thus the putting off leaving until 'tomorrow' - and I guess she's trying to do the best she can for Spike, so he'll have *someone* and not be all alone. Spike says he loves them both, and I'm sure in a way he does love BB, but ... not like he really loves Buffy, ya know? Don't get too hung up on that. It was just a blurted out term of endearment. He was kinda overwhelmed there at the end. :P

Yes, my evil muse is scary and I'd say you have a very good chance at the diabolical plot twist © being what happens next after the threesome is over. eeeek!! Good thing my muse is so damn hot and handsome with those piercing blue eyes and cheekbones and ... {sigh} ... without all that, he'd be really hard to live with.

Thanks so much for reading, AMI, and always stopping in! I love your notes! Always look forward to them! The real angst is coming, but I'll keep trying to break it up with some Bot humor so it doesn't get too overwhelming. {hugs}

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2013 - 03:05 am Title: I Kissed a Girl

I wondered how this would come about and you did an absolute great job of it. Kept the realism of characters and made it erotic. I look forward to the next to see how things work out between the Bot and Buffy. But most of all I'm glad she at least attempted to talk to him about babies again I just wish it would have gone better. Stupid Spike.

Author's Response: Hey Blue Eyes! I'm so glad you found the 'logic' of the threesome realistic - Buffy trying to 'be brave' for Spike so he wouldn't be all alone. Yes, I saw her keep trying to ask him about kids/family, but once he starts on a path, he's not gonna easily swayed from it. It'll take a bit for him to admit that he lied about that.

There will be a little angst for Buffy in the next chapter as she realizes that her plan to get the Bot and Spike together has been a success. Maybe it'll hurt enough to make her stay ... or maybe it'll just make her run faster. hmmmm ... We'll see.

Thank you so much for stopping in, Blue Eyes. I know a lot of people were worried about how the threesome would come about and work out. It means a lot to me that it felt right to you. The whole G/G/B thing worried me, too - I've never written that before (but my muse was just adamant about it). I'm glad everyone (thus far) has enjoyed it - or at least not been squicked by it. Thanks!

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2013 - 02:23 pm Title: I Kissed a Girl

OH May...Love It

Author's Response: Yay!! Thank you so much! I'm so glad! You have no idea how this threesome worried me, but my muse refused to let it go, so, I must bow to his wishes or he pouts. Not that the pouting isn't cute and all, but he stops talking too. :( Not good. Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: absyntheaddicted Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2013 - 01:06 pm Title: I Kissed a Girl

Lurve it! Cant wait til Saturday!

Author's Response: Yay!!! I'm so glad you loved it! I have to say that of everything I've ever written, this worried me the most. The next chapter will be a bit more ... intense with Spike a more active participant. I hope you continue to like it! Thanks so much for the support and positive reinforcement! It means a lot!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2013 - 11:38 am Title: I Kissed a Girl

:-)

Author's Response: Glad it got a smile and not a frown! Thank you so much!! Most worried about this threesome bit - never wrote one of these before, but my muse was most interested in trying it out. He's going through an experimental phase, I guess. :) Thanks, All4Spike!

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