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Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2013 - 07:26 pm Title: I Won't Give Up    

I’m sure I don’t have to tell you how much I enjoyed this angst-free chapter! Good for Buffy for deciding to use Spike’s actual surname! I hope the future angst doesn’t involve more misunderstandings between them since they are finally communicating with one another. Thanks for such a great update, more soon please.

Author's Response: Hey Melly! Yay! Finally a chapter without heavy angst! Just for you, sweets!! :P

Future angst ... there will small miscommunications, nothing like this. The angst will come more from outside sources in the future (thus far, from what I've been shown by my evil muse). More will be soon! Thanks so much, hun! You know I love hearing from you!

Reviewer: Asuras Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2013 - 03:08 pm Title: I Won't Give Up    

Not at risk of being boring by any stretch yet, you keep them very believable and it was time for a breather ; )
I'll second Comicbound's review as well, your including the bot isn't an easy feat and welldone. The risk with her is the same as with many Anya's: only brought in for forced "funny", out of place comments / actions. You avoid this and give her a space of her own.
Can't wait to see how this story progresses, so thank you for these regular updates! You make it impossible for me to put it aside to read when fully done : )

Author's Response: Hi Asuras! Glad you liked the chapter and didn't find it boring (I do really worry about that). We'll have some time to catch our breath from the angst now.

Oh, thank you so much for the note on the Bot! I've definitely tried to treat her like any other character - albeit with a slightly different POV and vocab. I think the Bot really wants to be helpful - that was the vibe I got from her at the beginning of S6 - so I'm trying to go with that 'theme' for her. Whatever she can do to help, she's happy to do. :)

Oh, that's a lovely compliment about not being able to wait for it to be done! I know how people worry about reading WIPS - we've all been burned - I'm so glad you like it well enough to take the chance! I won't leave you hanging, promise (barring anything tragic - knocks wood!).

Thanks for the thoughtful and lovely feedback! I really appreciate it so much! Stop back in again!

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2013 - 08:10 pm Title: I Won't Give Up    

Love that buffy and spike can have some happness for awhile...Awesome chapter

Author's Response: Thanks so much, dev!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! Will have more happy soon!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2013 - 07:46 pm Title: I Won't Give Up    

*squee* I loved it...any time they talk honestly with each other, I'm happy. Don't worry this is not boring ,even tho there is no angst, it's nice to have a lull in the heartbreak, cause I know it'll be back soon enough. Your evil muse will not allow anything less.

I agree with Buffy, they should move back to the States. Someplace isolated maybe like Montana or Idaho, or Wyoming. Hopefully they'll be able to pull it off.

I'm so glad that they started sleeping together again and that Buffy is not gonna let Disgusting Bastard ruin her life and what she has with Spike. UGH why did the Bot interrupt them? Bad Bot. ;) I hope she gets deprogrammed again for the sex stuff. I think Buffy and Spike should just concentrate on each other. But that's just me and my Spuffiness talking...3somes once or twice but not a constant thing.

Egg white and tofu quiche? Yuck! I hate tofu in anything. Poor Buffy, she needs a new diet. :] Get the Bot a new cookbook pronto!

Is it Tuesday yet? Loving it..*squishes*

Author's Response: Yay!!! I got a **Squee** from AMI!! I'm really glad it wasn't boring. When I'm not sobbing I worry that maybe it will be. LOL! But I know we need a break in there too. I hope there will actually be some laughs in the next couple of chapters. {{crosses fingers}}

Spike will, of course, work on her request to go back to the States soon. We'll see where they end up.

I agree with you on the sleeping together bit. I do think that there will continue to be threesomes, but there will also just be Spike and Buffy a lot. I haven't written anymore threesomes into the story. I was gonna ask later for people to vote on weather they'd like another one or not. My muse is happy with the two he did, but I have a spot in the story later where one would fit in well.

Poor Bot! She's just trying to be helpful, but she definitely needs a new cookbook! (and better timing) Gonna try to get Buffy some 'real food' soon! :)

I ate tofu once and ... {blech!!}} grossness! Poor Buffy!

My new favorite words are: 'Is it Tuesday yet?' and 'Is it Saturday yet?' Makes me all warm and fuzzy inside!!

Thanks so much, AMI! I really *lurve* your reviews - but you knew that! {{huggles}}

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2013 - 12:55 pm Title: I Won't Give Up    

They seriously need to get the bot some more recipe books! So glad that Buffy & Spike are coming to a happy accommodation - until the next crisis at least!

Author's Response: Hey All4Spike! LOL! No doubt about the cookbook issue! Buffy needs to buy her a chocolate creations cookbook or something! :)

Glad you enjoyed the lull in the angst! It will stay a little while. Thanks soo much for reading and stopping in!! Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2013 - 05:03 am Title: I Won't Give Up    

What a beautiful chapter and I love the whole name thing. But the thing to give me a chuckle was Bot and her cooking. Poor Buffy to be forced to eat so healthy. I feel her pain because I don't eat healthy, myself.



Author's Response: Hey Blue Eyes!! Poor Buffy - the Bot wanting her to eat properly ... it's sad really! Another test for her to endure, no doubt!! I ate tofu one time ... {blech!} I really feel for the Slayer! Glad you continue to enjoy the story and the Bot! She has become quite a jewel!! Thanks so much. You know I love hearing from you!!

Reviewer: comicbound Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2013 - 01:21 am Title: I Won't Give Up    

addictive story arc. inclusion of Bot refreshingly different and true to her character from canon. why haven't other authors utilized this character? ugh, especially since sex scenes tend to read all the same after one has read enough stories. kudos for the bravery. S.

Author's Response: Hey comicbound! Wow - thank you!!! What a lovely, thoughtful review! I don't know why people haven't used the Bot more. I was a little worried that people would shy away from it because of that, but everyone that has read has loved her. Even people that didn't like the threesome idea were happy with it afterwards.

My muse just really wanted to do a threesome G/G/B but at the same time, I didn't want Spike sleeping with anyone else ... thus Bot!

I'm so glad you've enjoyed it! I hope you continue to! Thank you for stopping in and letting me know!!

Reviewer: xXEMProductionsXx Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2013 - 12:23 am Title: I Won't Give Up    

More please xD love it! Michigan maybe :) xxxx love it and love spuffy xx Lilly xx

P.s. knew you wouldn't disappoint xx bring on tommorrow xxxxxx

Author's Response: Hey Lilly!! There is lots more to come! I will put in your suggestion for Michigan. :)

I'm so glad you're continuing to love it! I really worry when I'm not ripping hearts out that it will get boring. Glad it hasn't thus far! Tomorrow will be here Tuesday! :) Thank you again for reading and always stopping in! Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: cj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2013 - 11:32 pm Title: I Won't Give Up    

PFS you never disappoint the highs the lows are marvelous you just know how to capture a reader and keep them anticipating for more I am convinced Homer is part of your family tree

Author's Response: Hey, cj!! Oh - you're so sweet! Yes, I do think that Homer Simpson may be in my family tree! (( hehehehe!)) Really, that's so kind of you! It got my heart into my throat reading your review. There is lots more to come. I hope you continue to enjoy it! Thank you soooo very much. It means a lot to me! {hugs}

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