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Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2013 - 02:03 pm Title: Smile

How do you do it?! This chapter was even better than the last one!! What a beautiful, fantasy wedding and then to consummate there too – what a glorious way to start their marriage. Buffy giving them those rings was very sweet too. Austin here we come – Yeehaw!!!

Author's Response: Hey Melly! Squeeee! I'm so glad you liked the wedding and the consummation too! I just saw that picture of the Rock in the clouds like that and ... well, had to do that! Too perfect a spot! Glad you liked the rings, too - they are a family of three ... soon to be five. Look out, Austin! Here they come! :) thanks so much! Always look forward to and love your reviews! More soon!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2013 - 02:03 pm Title: Smile

I LOVED this so much...Spike's proposal was perfect. Well I like Joan a lot but I'm totally Spuffy so I didn't mind that the date was just the two of them, (with the proposal it had to be) I'm sure there'll be a SpuffBot date too.

I'm so glad Buffy finally got her quarterpounder lol and it seems that they won't be travelling by boat. I love that you write a smart Spike, the show made him out to be dumb sometimes, and Spike is not dumb...he survived a 100 plus yrs while taking care of insano Dru.

All the pics were great and I loved Buffy's dress and Spike in a tux and the dusty pink roses. :)

Don't mind me with the 3some stuff, I guess I'm just projecting how I feel onto Buffy...I wouldn't want my husband screwing my best friend or my sister so I guess I'm just feeling strongly about that. The squick is just how I feel about that, not the way you're writing or anything. I do get the friends vibe from them, it's just me. Like I said I'll keep reading and enjoying, it just bugs me a bit is all.

Thanks for responding, hon. Love ya.

Amazing, romantic chappie. Now I'm just waiting for the BAD to come. Your evil, blue-eyed muse has been too quiet lately. *eek*

*hugs and smooches*

Author's Response: Hey, AMI! So glad you liked the chapter and the date! Nearly everyone thought I meant the three of them would be on the date, so I had to add in that first scene to clarify that for Buffy and everyone. I guess I over-used the word 'we' in the previous chapter. Oops!

Oh, I agree - Spike is very smart! There's no way he could've survived this long without being smart. Some of his plans didn't work too well ('got bored' - my fave), but didn't mean he wasn't intelligent.

Hopefully the three-stuff won't be too wigsome. There's a bit of it in the next chapter, but mostly we won't be too focused on that. Hopefully the rest will make up for any squick there.

Oh, you're welcome! I take what everyone says seriously. I've gotten some great ideas from reviews and try to look at it from other perspectives. I get what you're saying about Buffy and being protective. I just think, in this story, the way she's come out of her dark places has always been with both Spike and Joan there, so ... she's actually the one attaching to Joan more than Spike is. Does that make sense? She's the glue holding the three together, not Spike. Not sure if that makes any difference in the 'bugs me' dept or not.

My evil devil of a muse has been awfully quiet ... when the bad comes, it's sure to be a doozy!! Eek!!

xoxoxox Luv ya, AMI!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2013 - 11:28 pm Title: Smile

So glad they had a wonderful date... and maybe didn't pull the Bot in, but seemed like it was for the right reason. I think she'll have her night soon. And it would seem that they can travel back to Austin without any more nausea. Sounds good. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hey BR! Sorry the Bot wasn't included, but I don't think this was the right time. They' take her out one night and make sure she feels included, promise! Yep - Spike's greased some wheels! We'll see how that works out soon! Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! Love hearing from you!! xoxoxo <3

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2013 - 02:25 pm Title: Smile

You worried needlessly about this chapter. I don’t think it could have been written any better!! The dress, the meal, the conversation, the proposal were all so wonderful!! And they all happened on and literally in a hellmouth! Please tell your muse that I’m living in fear of the angst to come – that should make him happy! Thanks for another wonderful chapter. More soon please!

Author's Response: Heehee, Melly! Well, I couldn't say ...'oh, don't worry, it's fine' My muse would never talk to me again, would he? :P

He likes keeping us sitting on the edge. It's when we start to sit back and relax that the dip in the coaster hits us unexpectedly. :P Glad you liked it, Melly!! thanks so much for reading and always stopping in!! My muse loves you! xoxoxoxxo <3

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2013 - 04:47 am Title: Smile

Woo Hoo love the song like having one from the man himself. I know I had begun to wonder how the night would go with roller coaster rides plus hellmouth and you surprised me by keeping things good. Which after reading the chapter was really the best route they deserve to have some time together that is happy and perfect. I like Spike's explanation of Angel something I thought all along when they showed where he came from compared to where Spike came from and everything that happened along the way made sense because of the people they truly were deep inside. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.

Author's Response: Hey, Blue Eyes!!! Shock! My muse didn't let anything bad happen! There were numerous spots he could've turned it angsty and he didn't. Maybe he is feeling under the weather, after all! :) (or, perhaps we're still on the way up, higher, higher ... until he can take us by surprise by the next plunge)

Glad you like Spike's explanation of why he and Angelus are so different. I keep using the same variation on the theme on that in different stories, but it's just what feels right to me.

Love that song - Smile is one of my very favorites of JMs. Glad you enjoyed it, BE!!! Love hearing from you. More soon. xoxoxo <3

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2013 - 01:52 am Title: Smile

Tear loved spike proposal to buffy

Author's Response: Yayaya!! Glad you loved it and it got tears! Thank you so much, dev!!

Reviewer: Mysellllffff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2013 - 11:01 pm Title: Smile

First of all: GOTR ROCKED!!!!!!!

And second:
awww.... the way William was seeping through was something so sweet... *sigh* There's just something so adorable in "I've always been bad"-Spike

Even though this wasn't a threesome-date, the beautiful proposal more than made up for that... *sees engagement sex in the next chappie*
And we'll have plenty of time for threesomes... right?!?

DTAS RULES!

btw Buffy's reaction to the meal... PRICELESS

Author's Response: Hey, Myselllllllllllfffffffffffff!!! They so did ROCK! OMG! I was really worried based on the early sound checks that my computer was gonna lag and it was gonna be crap, but it was perfect! They were perfect! The whole freaking thing was perfect! Want another one NOW!!!

Glad you liked William seeping through ... swoon! What's better than a bad-boy with a sweet, tender heart?

oooo ... engagement sex, the NIGHT before their wedding? Isn't that bad luck? Hmmmmm ... we'll have to see about that. No promises. But yes - there will be plenty of time for three-somes. Many chapters left to go.

Glad you liked Buffy and her burger-fixation! heehee!

DTAS RULES! RIGHT ON!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2013 - 10:14 pm Title: Smile

I think I got carried away after Buffy's enthusiasm for the shopping trip, buying stuff for Joan. Glad the date was just the two of them, though. It wouldn't have been appropriate to have company for the proposal - which was just sappy enough. :-)

Author's Response: hey A4S! You weren't the only one on the three-date. When I got so many comments about looking forward to the three-date I was like ... oh shit! I didn't write a three-date ... obviously I wasn't clear enough on that! Soooo ... I made Buffy unclear and added that whole scene about Spike explaining it at the last minute. Glad you thought the proposal was just sappy enough! The build-up to that had me really worried that I'd never be able to live up to the expectations! Thank you so much for reading and always stopping in! I love hearing from you!

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