Oh dear, head on with the FE I see. That's a full-sized shoe ineed.
Glad to see them being open with eachother instead of letting the evil suggestions fester. Seems right for where their relationship's at.
I'ma install me some seatbelts for the rest of this I think :)

Author's Response: Hi Asuras ... Yeah, I think if this had happened at a different period in their life, the suggestions and ideas would've festered rather than being shared, but they've been through enough now to trust each other. Yes, you may want some seatbelts - maybe a safety harness and goggles too. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you.

Wow, Shit ,and Crap! I was not expecting The First. *eek* How the hell will they be able to defeat it? OMG it's really seriously bad now. :(

The beginning was cute..I was hoping for the start of Jodia, but I guess it's not to be. Oh well :(

The Firsts! were horrid, but First!Joyce was way scarier and creepier...telling Buffy to kill the bits. :(
At least they are telling each other everything. they can't give the First any more power than it already has. Wonder how they will figure things out now...maybe Giles? I dunno just taking a guess. Will Joan be affected too? I would think not, cause she's a bot but your muse is evil so anything is possible.

*Biting my nails now cause this is REALLY BAD!*

*kisses*

Author's Response: Hey AMI ... I kinda left the Jodia open .. I mean, Joan obviously wants to, so if Spike and Buffy give her permission later??? never know what might happen. I never considered having the First appear to Joan for some reason - I guess cos of the emotional turbulence it got out of Spike and Buffy was enough to satisfy my muse. It might be interesting to see it appear to Joan ... could even be kinda funny.

Thanks again for reading and stopping in ... {hugs you}}

So enjoying the story and lok forward to updates on this well written story....

Author's Response: Thank you Merryreader and welcome! I'm very glad you've enjoyed it so far. I try to update a couple of times a week - barring anything unforeseen. Thanks so much for stopping in.