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Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2013 - 11:47 am Title: Breakaway, Part 1



Thanks for such a fun-filled chapter and the touching scene
between Buffy and Joan and a really Big thank you for the warning about the
next part.  I think I’ll speed-read
through the upcoming scene knowing it may well be their last together is making
me sad already and this is from someone that never, ever cared for any
threesome fanfic.  Thanks again for a
great chapter.





Author's Response: Glad you liked the fun and the emotions between the two women. I really enjoyed writing that. I'm so glad that the threesome between these characters has turned into something really loving and emotional, ya know? I hadn't really planned that when I started, but, like Joan, it just evolved. Stories have a way of taking on a life of their own. :) Thanks, Melly. {hugs}

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2013 - 08:27 pm Title: Breakaway, Part 1

OOOH naughty, naughty Spike. :) He got a hot show and his "precious" washed. lol

You know I love the idea of Jodia...so glad that you'll go there. :) Very cute almost kiss too.

Loved Buffy threatening to put her foot up Spike's ass cross-ways. hee hee. I love me some obnoxious Spike.

Well looks like Joffy started the lovin' without Spike. Buffy really controls the relationship doesn't she? It seems both do what she wants.

I'll read pt.2 later. Not too into girl on girl. But as long as Spike's there I'm good.

Fun chappie...*smooch*

Author's Response: haha! Spike is a naughty boy! Two birds ... well, actually three, I guess, with India -- one stone. haha!

glad you liked the 'almost kiss'. :D And there is little better than obnoxious Spike and Buffy getting huffed up at him. :P

Yeah, Buffy really is what holds the three together, I think. And ... yeah, both Spike and Joan are her 'willing slaves' I suppose. Not sure either are minding too much. I'm not too girl on girl either, and I actually struggled with that a lot. Hope you like how it came out, tho. The one guy I know that reads Spuffy assured me it was 'hot'. So .,.. yay! haha! Thanks, AMI! Glad you liked!! {{hugs}}

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2013 - 01:55 pm Title: Breakaway, Part 1

I think that Spike's choice of reward wasn't in fact concerned with getting his car clean. Well, it was, but there were other, wet, bikini-clad factors involved....

Author's Response: Haha! Ya think?? *grin* He's such a devil! Two birds, one stone. :) Thanks for reading and stopping in All4Spike! Love hearing from you!!

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2013 - 12:26 pm Title: Breakaway, Part 1

Love that india will be part of the family

Author's Response: Thanks, Dev! Glad you're enjoying it! :)

Reviewer: Isis Nocturne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2013 - 02:11 am Title: Breakaway, Part 1

Love this update and can't wait for the other half!

Author's Response: Thank you, Isis!! Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading here and stopping in!

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