You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: AMI Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2013 - 11:03 pm Title: Pavement Cracks

Oh man, poor Buffy...she's just in such a bad place and so overwhelmed. She needs help, and Spike is really bad off. :( I hope she considers giving him her blood.

Hopefully someone can offer her help. Giles maybe? It's partially his fault about Angelus. Too bad she has no close friends. :(

This is so sad, I just want some relief soon. And plz for God's sake I hope the 3 maniacs are really and truly dead.


Great chappie, still so sad. *hugs*

Author's Response: Hey, AMI! Yeah, my muse couldn't just let all the death and destruction be the end of Buffy's woes, but had to pile a bunch more stress on her with the babies and just trying to be a mom. Hopefully, she'll soon find some place to turn for help ... we'll find out next. Relief may be coming ... hold on a little longer. {hugs} Thanks so much for reading and sticking with me through the angst! xo

Reviewer: Catrine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2013 - 07:21 pm Title: Pavement Cracks

Poor poor Buffy, and Spike! I really hope they are out of the woods at this time. How much can a couple deal with? (I know, Spuffy survive everything ;) ) I`m really gonna miss Joan, she was such an extraordinary person. I loved how you managed to evolve her from a sort of "mindless" bot to a unique person and the dynamic of the threesome. You have created yet another fantastic Spuffy universe. I`ve read the Unexpected serier a couple of times, and I will certainly reread this one also :) Can`t wait to see what happens.



Author's Response: Hi Catrine! Thanks so much for the wonderful compliments! Yeah, Spuffy survive everything, eventually! But it's the journey through hell that's so heart-wrenching. I'll really miss Joan too. I really liked Joan and how she managed to evolve over time. I struggled a lot with her demise, but loved the tragic poetry of her sacrifice. A true Champion. When I started, I never imagined she'd become such a HUGE part of the story, honestly. Now, I'm so glad I included her. Thanks again, more soon!

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2013 - 03:41 am Title: Pavement Cracks

Poor buffy who will help her now...Great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks, dev! We'll find out soon if she can get help or if she'll have to do it all on her own.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2013 - 08:55 pm Title: Pavement Cracks

Poor Buffy, it's all coming down on her head. Time to take a deep breath and start doing one thing at a time. Shame she has nobody left to call for help......

Author's Response: yeah, everything is literally coming down on her head and she's just so exhausted and emotionally drained. Where can she turn for help? We'll find out. Thanks A4S! Love hearing from you!

You must login (register) to review.