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Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2013 - 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 8

I loved Joyce deciding to go with Buffy to face the Scoobies, ready to give them a piece of her mind :D I'm so glad you kept Joyce alive lol Her chat with Spike was very touching, and I lol'd at the funny bits. You did a great job with including more of the characters' thoughts and feelings. I'd swear you've been writing for years if I didn't know better! I loved the bit with Buffy thinking how Spike doesn't condescend when he talks to her. That's so true! That was a very cool description of Spike sword-fighting the demon in the cemetery! I could easily see it on the TV screen in my head :) Buffy's talk with her friends should be interesting! I hope Joyce smacks Xander if he gets bitchy. But a verbal smackdown would also be satisfying heehee

Author's Response: Hey PB! : ) I'm glad I kept Joyce alive too, she gives me another point of view with which to come at the Buffy/Spike thing that the scoobies don't. And with Joyce still alive, Buffy's gonna be in a better place emotionally than she was on the show. I'm pleased you liked my attempt at delving a little deeper into the thoughts and feelings of everyone, I wasn't sure how it would turn out, but I'm quite happy with it. And as for the condescension thing, it's true though, right? Angel always had this air of smug superiority about him when interacting with Buffy or the scoobs. One of the things I took an instant dislike to, regarding him. I'm glad you like the little fight scene as well, wasn't sure if it would work, and if people could 'see' it in their mind, but if you could see it, then that's brilliant. And as for the talk with Buffy's friends... I'm hoping to deliver something satisfying, and of course, can't have Joyce remain a spectator through the whole thing... dun dun duhh! : ) Thanks for the review PB, They really do mean a lot to me, and I love hearing about what you liked, and maybe what you think I could do better. Finally, THANK YOU very much for the beautiful banner, in fact, both of them. I really do love them, the first one is so perfect, what with Spike being injured and all, and the second one? With Spike's letter in the background... OMG!!! They're wonderful. Thank you. Right, I'm out. Take care PB, and thanks for the review. X

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2013 - 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh, that banner LOOKS AWESOME! I love it, PB and DH! And I really love the last line of this chapter. Buffy finally coming to her senses! Yay! Of course, you had me all teary with Spike telling Buffy he'd understand if he wasn't worth it. {{cuddles poor Spikey}} I'm so glad she assured him that he was! Really liked this chapter, DH! {hugs}

Author's Response: HI P4S, Yeah, PB did a beautiful job on it, I really love it. I'm very pleased that you liked the chapter, especially as I was venturing into new territory for me. As for Buffy coming to her senses...had to happen eventually, right? : ) Sorry to make you all teary, but that's Spike for you... he still has those insecurities of his! Once again, thanks for all the help you've given me, and for sticking with me. I truly appreciate it P4S. Thanks for the review, take care. X

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2013 - 07:48 am Title: Chapter 8

Very good, the thoughts and what they say. Buffy has made up her mind and with Joyce support, she can do this.

Author's Response: Thanks Magnus. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and didn't mind that I tried something a little different. And yes, with Joyce's and Dawn's support, Buffy really does think that she can do this. She has her family, and they'll stand by her, which gives her the strength she needs. Thanks for the review, and sticking with me. I do appreciate it.

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