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Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2014 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter 14

I think my angsty influence has rubbed off on you, DH! Of course, that was my evil plan when I offered to beta for you, turn you into an angst-machine! :-) In all seriousness, though, excellent chapter. Loved the ogling and laughing at the beginning and the crying in the middle. Felt so bad for all of them really, but for Spike, Buffy and Anya in particular. You know I love it when a story makes me cry and you did! I can't wait to see just who exacts retribution on Xander! Will it be Anya or Buffy or Ripper? Or JOYCE? Or the witches? The possibilities for major pain are limitless. I almost feel bad for Xan now ... almost! ;-) Great chapter! Keep it up!

Author's Response: HI, P4S! Heehee, well, that angsty stuff of yours seems to be contagious, alright! LOL. I'd like to think I'm getting the hang of it. Glad that you liked the chapter, and there were bit in there that you could lol at, as well as the more emotional stuff towards the end. As for Xander, and who's gonna get to him first.... I'm not telling, but rest assured, I don't think he will fare too well! You reap what you sow. Thanks for the review, P4S, but more importantly, thanks for all the help and encouragement you've given me. This story wouldn't be half of what it is without you, that I can promise. Remember, first timer here, so all the help is greatly appreciated and welcomed! :-) OK, that's me done. Thanks again P4S, for everything. Take care. X

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2014 - 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 14

Wow, great chapter! I'm glad you started off with some funny bits :) There were a lotta good <p>laughs. The scene with Joyce & Dawn ogling Spike was great heehee 'Gratuitous Male Objectification </p><p>Day' is now my favorite holiday lol I visualized Spike standing there in nothing but his jeans, </p><p>staring at him right along with Dawn and Joyce @_@ Thanks for that! ;P And Buffy's subsequent </p><p>teasing of her mom and sister was very funny :D</p><p>Anya made me LOL several times, I love her! Tara asking Spike for a peek at his fabulous bod was </p><p>unexpected and also made me LOL heehee</p><p>I wanted to cuddle Spike so bad when he couldn't stop them from watching the video *cuddles Spike* </p><p>Poor Buffy and Anya's reactions to the video were heartbreaking :( You really did a great job of </p><p>describing their sense of betrayal and disillusionment! I'm relieved they were able to take in the </p><p>good things Spike said on the tape and that they didn't blame him for what happened. </p><p>Xander has some 'esplainin to do! That ain't gonna be pretty... I can't wait! >:D lol</p>



Author's Response: PB, PB, PB... where to begin? :-) First up, thank you for the review, it means a lot tat you're willing to share your thoughts with me about what I've written. Your positive comments really do mean so much to me, and for that, I truly thank you. Glad you liked the chapter, and that I got some giggles here and there. So, if there's gonna be a 'Gratuitous Male Objectification Day', does that mean that there's gonna be a female one as well? 'Cos that would be my favourite holiday, for sure! Heehee Glad that I could give you some pleasant thoughts, along with Joyce and Dawn. It would appear that you're in good company! LOL. Thanks also for the encouragement about the emotional responses in the aftermath of the tape. That was quite difficult for me, to convey, but I'm glad that it seemed to work and that people certainly haven't said it was bad. That's always nice. As for Xander, I'm afraid that you'll just have to wait and see. Heehee >;-D Seriously though, PB, thank you so much for all your encouragement and inspiration. I wouldn't be here without it, and that's a debt to you I can't begin to quantify. A simple thank you and my gratitude will have to do, I'm afraid. It's all I have to give you. Right, that'll do from me. Take care, PB, and thank you again. X

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2014 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 14

Absolutely brilliant update, fanastic denoument. Yay, was on the edge of my seat. loved it. Everyones reaction was spot on, could almost feel sorry for the berk, almost. Worth the wait.....



Author's Response: Hi, Jane. Sorry for the delay, but, well, RL happens every now and again. Glad you liked the chapter, and I could could keep you interested. Hopefully, the next one will also be well received. As for Xander, and feeling sorry for him... ... well, I'll leave that up to you, if that's OK? :-) Thank you for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it, and I promise to ALWAYS reply, even if it takes me a little while, and so in that respect, all I can beg for is patience. Thanks again, and take care. X

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2014 - 11:05 am Title: Chapter 14

First the nice teasing and funny moments, then they saw the tape. They needed to see it, but it also hurt them so much. What will Xander try to say about this? He has totally fucked up.

Author's Response: Hi, Magnus. Thanks for your input, I appreciate the time you took to leave me a comment. I hope that you liked the chapter, and that the next one lives up to expectations. As for what Xander has to say, well, we'll get there, I promise. Take care, and thank you once again for leaving me your thoughts. I do apologise for the lateness of the reply, but I do promise to ALWAYS reply, it just might be a little late.

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