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Reviewer: AgentKalGibbs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2015 - 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 16

Holy fuckin hell, I love this!

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2015 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 16

Brilliant update, well worth the wait. I've been dying for the gang to launch into the little twerp and I wasn't dissapointed. Sadly it didn't take, maybe a few kicks to the head would be more effective. Just a thought....Loved it

Reviewer: Spuffy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2014 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 16

Gee what a surprise Xander not taking responsibility everyone else's fault...

 

great at chapter can't wait for more



Author's Response: Hello, Spuffy. Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked it, and I do promise to try and update. I am currently writing, but with my life and the new job, I don't have all that much free time any more, but I'm not giving up, so don't worry. :-) As for Xander, are you really surprised? Heehee I mean, it's Xander, OF COURSE it's not his fault! It's everyone's fault but his!! Trust me, things will get straightened out, but as to what will happen to him... .. we'll just have to wait and see. :-) Thanks once again for the review. Take care. X

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2014 - 04:45 am Title: Chapter 16

Really great chapter.  The confrontation was really well done.  You could really feel the rage in Buffy.  I am glad that she did not pummel Xander.  This was perfect.  Of course he could not accept responsibility and blames Spike.  Look forward to the next update.



Author's Response: Hi, Bridget. Thanks very much for the review, and your kind words. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I do promise, here and now, that I'm still writing, but what with life and my new job, I don't the time that I used to. Still, as I said, I am in the process of writing the next chapter, but I'm afraid it'll be up when it's up, and I can't really give a prediction as to when that'll be, but I am gonna finish. That, I swear. Thanks once again for reading and taking the time to review, and I'm glad you liked it. Take care. X

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2014 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter 16

The confrontation was really well done, so intense! It was easy to get caught up in the rollercoaster of emotions.

Buffy really tore into Xander! I totally thought she was going to beat the shit out of him lol You gave some good examples of Xander's bad past behavior. I said, "Hey.. that's true, he did/does do that!" a few times lol 

I actually felt kinda bad for Xander at first... Not that he didn't deserve their condemnation, but it was just sad that it had to come to that.  I felt less bad for Xander after he blamed Spike for the whole thing and started plotting to stake him, of course lol

Thank you for what you said in the notes ^_^ You always know how to make me smile *big hugs*



Author's Response: Hi, PB!! I'm glad you seemed to like the chapter, and you got caught up in it all, that's nice to hear. :-) And yeah, can you tell that I was struggling to keep Buffy from kicking his ass?!! Lol And as for Xander, what can I say? I don't like him. Never really have. Like I had Buffy point out, he's arrogant, manipulative and irresponsible. Not endearing qualities in my opinion!:-) Sorry for making you sad for Xander, although I guess I should be pleased that I was able to take you on a little emotional ride. That's pretty cool, actually! YAY! Heehee. And good that by the end of it, you weren't feeling sorry for him. I know I've read some stories where they try and make him a sympathetic character, and justify his bigotry and such, but I just can't do that, I'm afraid. And finally, glad I could make you smile. I'll try my best to keep it up. :-) Thank you sooo much for the beautiful Banner as well, PB. I love it, it's so good and awesome and amazing. It's perfect. Truly, thank you. Right, I'm out. Take care, PB, and thanks once again, for everything. You truly are brilliant. X

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2014 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 16

A really strong chapter, an emotionell peak. Buffy lether rage lose in what she said. She will probably feel a bit embarrassed when she cooles of though. It was almost painful to see how Xander was trying to save himself from what he said, like when an accident happen, you can't help but look. Xander seems to have lost his ability to think, killing Spike would make things even worse for him.

Author's Response: Hi, Magnus. Thanks for taking time to let me know what you thought,and I'm glad you liked the chapter. As for Buffy being embarrassed, hhmmmm, I might have to disagree with you there. We'll see, but she didn't say anything that was untrue. OK, a couple of things were a little harsh, but then, so was Xander, so I think she'll feel justified. And she has the support of everyone else, so... we'll see. And as for Xander, again, you'll have to wait and see. I don't want to spoil things for you. Thank you once again for taking the time to leave me your thoughts, and for sticking with me. Take care.

Reviewer: amayuscula Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2014 - 11:48 am Title: Chapter 16

Please update soon.

Author's Response: I promise to try, OK? RL can be a little hectic at times, but I promise to try. :-)

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2014 - 05:07 am Title: Chapter 16

I forgot to say, WOW, what a cool new banner too!! PB has outdone herself with that one!

Author's Response: I know, right? It's frickin' AWESOME!! PB, if you read this; LOVE IT!! SOOOOOOOO GOOD!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2014 - 05:06 am Title: Chapter 16

Ooooooooooooo.... Okay, I really wanted *Someone* to pummel Xander! First I thought it would be Spike, despite the pain from the chip. Then I thought it would be Buffy, then I thought it would be Willow zapping him with magic, then Anya ... then Giles ... then JOYCE .. .but NO! NONE! NO ONE! ARGH! :-) That's just evil, DH! I see where you got your name, now! I hope someone pummels him before he gets a chance to stake Spike! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Sorry to disappoint you P4S. No beating of Xander today! Maybe next time. Then again, maybe not. Who knows! Heehee. Seriously though, I'm glad you liked the chapter, and I promise, I didn't mean to be evil. Well, not REALLY evil, anyway! :-D And as for Xander staking Spike? Hhhhmmmmm... maybe. Maybe not. You'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for the praise though, P4S, and all the help as well. Believe me, my grammar appreciates it! :-) Take care, and thanks again. X

Reviewer: Asharah Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2014 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter 16

He is NEVER gonna learn is he? It's never his fault, somebody else always to blame.



Author's Response: Hi Asharah, thanks for taking the time to stop in and leave me a comment. And as for Xander, no, I don't think he will learn, but mainly because he CAN'T! If it's not his fault, then as far as he's concerned, there's nothing for him TO learn. We learn from mistakes made, right? But he doesn't think he's made any, so... what can he learn from those 'non-mistakes'? Anyway, thanks for your comments, and take care. X

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