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Reviewer: mscecilyunderwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2014 - 10:42 am Title: Obligations

Wow Willow and Xander didnt really feel any remorse for pulling buffy from heaven or paradise huh? Not to mention offloading from Spike ! And they had the nerve to look down on the vampire? And omg, willow just kept stacking the letters from the mortgage company? They should have paid rent somehow to Dawn to take care of the house! Just like in the show, i hated them for feeling entitled and privileged you know. Just because theyre needed to move in to help look after Dawn, doesnt mean everything came free for "house-sitting/babysitting rendered"! Thats one of the things that made me bristle at Joss and the show's writers. They really made Buffy and Dawn and Spike's lives dark and miserable those last 2 seasons. So I hope you plan on doing something about that. Buffy would get a job to pay a house she couldnt live in because Willow and Tara were in it. She should be living there, with Margaret and Spike. The witches would have to go back to the dorms just like before. Not to mention that Willow's uite dangerous. Plus Giles didnt know Willow's transgression against him and the baby too. Margaret was in pain during the ritual right? Im supposing thats just tip of the iceberg on the issue of her blood being used for the resurrection spell. As for the job, maybe you could give something to Buffy other then her Doublemeat Palace job in the show? And the sympathy checks would need to revert to Dawn and Buffy now right? They'd need all the help they could get..hmmm why not have Buffy having jobs like being a doctor's receptionist/assistant, or working at the espresso pump. Or temping in addition to the DMP if you dont want to deviate so much from the show for awhile.

I'm really looking forward for more of your story and may you have inspiration to write and write and write! Thanks for sharing this with us!

Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2014 - 02:46 pm Title: Obligations

Nice to see more of this, I was thinking it had been orphaned.

Reviewer: amayuscula Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2014 - 12:47 pm Title: Obligations

Please update soon. I like the story and I would like to read more.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2014 - 11:36 am Title: Obligations

It's great to see a new chapter.

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