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Reviewer: IT Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2014 - 03:51 am Title: Because it's Wrong

Thanks for the update! I like the way this story's developing.



Author's Response: Thank you for the review! So happy you're intrigued, I will update again soon! :)

Reviewer: diebirchen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2014 - 08:35 pm Title: Because it's Wrong

I love your story.  F.Y.I.  The past tense of "raise" is "raised," not "rose," which is the past tense of "rise."  Need a grammar beta?



Author's Response: I'm so happy you like this fic! Also, thank you so very much for the offer, but I really do enjoy editing my own work, I see it as a learning process. Thanks for pointing out the grammar mistake, though, and for reviewing! I hope you continue to read and enjoy! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2014 - 09:42 pm Title: Because it's Wrong

enjoying..



Author's Response: Glad to hear it!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2014 - 06:57 am Title: Because it's Wrong

Like this story, the chase and denial enhancing what will make for a spectacular and passionate journey.



Author's Response: I hope it is interesting and I really hope you continue to enjoy it, thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2014 - 07:03 am Title: Because it's Wrong

We got to see more of Buffy's mind. she's drawn to Spike, but doesn't want to and it scares her to have these feelings.

Author's Response: Yes, happy to know that came through in the writing :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2014 - 09:03 am Title: Because it's Wrong

Super update, looking forward to more.



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2014 - 03:01 am Title: Because it's Wrong

Poor Spike with all his sublety of a sledgehammer, and poor Careful Buffy comfortable in her life mundane. Perhaps she needs Spike more than she thinks. I'd like to think so, and I'm so looking forward to finding out!

As always - hooked and can't wait for more. Thanks so much for the update! I can already tell this is going to be super fun.



Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review and for reading, so glad you're interested in the story, can't wait to post more! :)

Reviewer: VickyT2010 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2014 - 01:42 am Title: Because it's Wrong

120% hooked on this story! Loved Buffy and Spike's conversation in this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Author's Response: Yay! So happy to hear that, thank you for reviewing!!

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