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Reviewer: diebirchen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2014 - 06:47 pm Title: Barbed Wire

Great story!  Waiting. . .



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Andrea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2014 - 05:20 pm Title: Barbed Wire

So far good 



Author's Response: Happy to know you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2014 - 11:26 am Title: Barbed Wire

enjoyed..   How sad for Spike ... and frightening for Buffy.  At least she knows he can't and won't harm a human for "blood". 



Author's Response: Glad to know you're liking it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Petra Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2014 - 12:46 pm Title: Barbed Wire

I am really enjoying this fic. Spike's frustration that she doesn't realize ha might not have wanted to be tied to her either is pretty evident. You don't write like a beginner! Please tell me you'll update soon!

Author's Response: This is a lovely review, thank you. I will update as soon as I can, there are some things going on right now in RL that may cause delay in updates, but this fic will not go unfinished. Thanks for reading *hugs*

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2014 - 01:54 am Title: Barbed Wire

Can't wait for more! I liked your other fics, & this one seems to be shaping up great.



Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thank you for this kind review and for reading my writing, I can't wait to continue this story! :)

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2014 - 09:11 am Title: Barbed Wire

Very good. Buffy feels trapped by all this, and in a way she is, and if you'r trapped you'r looking for a way out. Buffy's thinking makes total sense in her situation.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like how I'm writing her reaction, also hope you continue to enjoy the story! Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: valerie21601 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2014 - 05:33 am Title: Barbed Wire

He could ask her out on a date, so they can talk and get to know each other. 

Outside of knowing his name, Buffy doesn't know a thing about him like where he's from, his age, what he was like before he became a vampire, the circumstances of his being turned.    Share what his likes, dislikes are, with her.   Let find out what they have in common, if they're each others, other half, surely they are compatible and have things in common as well as things that would drive each other crazy over the years.  



Author's Response: I appreciate this review and I'm so happy you are reading! Thank you for the feedback. I don't think I will have them go on a date, though I like the idea, I have some other things in mind. I will be having the emotions running high for both characters and the claim's powerful influence will play a part in forcing them to accept one another as whole persons rather than getting to know personal details about each other first, though the details will come in time, but maybe not in the order you're expecting. This fic is going to be slightly unrealistic to regular life, because it is a supernatural world I'm focusing on and the rules are often different in such stories, at least for this one they will be. I really hope you continue reading and that you enjoy where I take the story, thanks again for reviewing! *huggles* :)

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