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Reviewer: tigerlilee84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2014 - 03:13 pm Title: Riding Roller Coasters and Falling Headfirst

I check everyday to see if this fic has been updated.  I absolutely love it and the way that you write!  Looking forward to seeing them get to know each other a little more. :)



Author's Response: This warmed my writer's heart, thank you so so much! I promise to update ASAP, thank you for reading! :)

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2014 - 07:04 pm Title: Riding Roller Coasters and Falling Headfirst

I am having so much fun with this. It's weird though, the mood isn't light and bubbly, but I find myself smiling at my screen while I read. I think it's the uncomplicated nature of your story so far. I am not worrying over multiple other characters viewpoints or motivations.
The only thing I have to worry about is exactly whats happening on the screen.

I love it, and I am looking forward too more.

Author's Response: I am so glad to hear that! I really wanted this story to evoke that response, not bubbly and exactly happy but not overly angsty either. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story as it progresses, the focus will be on Spike and Buffy quite a lot. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2014 - 10:38 pm Title: Riding Roller Coasters and Falling Headfirst

I'm really liking this!



Author's Response: Yay!! Thank you for reading and reviewing!! :) I am so happy you like this fic!

Reviewer: VickyT2010 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2014 - 08:54 pm Title: Riding Roller Coasters and Falling Headfirst

Loved this chapter! I'm so excited to see what will happen now that Buffy has started to let him in a little bit. :)))

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you're excited! Thanks for reviewing!! :D

Reviewer: valerie21601 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2014 - 05:44 pm Title: Riding Roller Coasters and Falling Headfirst

Spike needs to either sit down with Buffy or take her out on a date, so they can really talk to each other, one on one and clear some things up between each other.  Tell her some or most of his past, show her, some of his softer side and his own fears and hopes about 'mating' with her, too.

 

Will Buffy take Spike out to meet Willow and Oz, so word will get out she's already involved/dating another man already?  And she can stop playing matchmaker?

 

I look forward to reading what happens next.



Author's Response: Willow learned her lesson, and Buffy probably won't be introducing Spike to people yet. As for Spike and Buffy sitting down and talking things out, they will communicate in their own time, and I may not always write out those scenes. Right now Spike is afraid to spook Buffy by showing too many of his expectations, and with the claim, they are both very driven to follow their gut instincts as well as their feelings so personal details about each other can be learned later. I am glad that your interest is caught, and thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I hope that the story continues to intrigue you!

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2014 - 02:45 pm Title: Riding Roller Coasters and Falling Headfirst

Buffy's irritation over being set up was seen clearly here. She seems ready to try this with Spike now, which is nice.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! And yes, she is finally starting to accept things. :)

Reviewer: Claudia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2014 - 08:04 am Title: Riding Roller Coasters and Falling Headfirst

I was so excited to find a new chapter and I devoured it. It was absolutely perfect, I like the way Buffy is starting to fall for her mate.

You are a talented writer and I'm so happy to have the chance to read you story, thank you for your work.



Author's Response: This review made my night, thank you so much! I love writing Spuffy fanfiction and I love that you are enjoying this story, thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: nina1074 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2014 - 06:19 pm Title: Riding Roller Coasters and Falling Headfirst

Awww, they connected! I loved it! I also really like the brush off Buffy gave Riley. I am one of the minority that didn't much care for Willow. I found her character to be meddlesome, and lacking contrition. Both her and Xander always seems to get a free pass, so I really liked that your Buffy has recognized that Willow has crossed the line right away. This Buffy seems to have a stronger sense of self, and I really like it.

Mostly I really like her interaction with Spike, and how she's quickly accepting their situation, and is open to understanding it more. I'm very excited for the next chapter. You write so well, and have such fresh ideas. I also like how your chapter lengths are hearty, and not the two or three paragraphs that seem to have become common among new writers. It makes it worth the wait.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Author's Response: First of all, thank you so so much for this lovely review! I'm glad you like the way I write, that is a huge compliment to me. Sometimes I feel my chapters can range on the short side, but I try to not let that happen very often, and I'm so glad you liked this chapter. As for Buffy having a stronger sense of self, I always think she had a very good sense of self, but I do believe in certain areas of the show and her life she had doubts that sometimes got in the way of her happiness. I personally try to write her in fanfiction by either focusing on season 1-Buffy or season 7-Buffy, or a combination of the two. I feel Buffy was very innocent and hardly cynical in season 1, which I like. And I feel she was extremely mature, well grounded, and open-minded in season 7, which I also like. Obviously, there are so many facets of Buffy Summers and she is always amazing, but when I write her I really like to try and capture the character she was in the latest season of the show. In this fic that is what I am trying to do, along with some added innocence, which I believe she could easily have in her character since she is not a slayer and did not have to deal with many of the fallouts and heartbreaks that job brought her. And as for Willow, Buffy and her are close friends in this, but not as close as they were in the TV show. Plus, Buffy is dealing with her want for Spike, so another man coming into her life right now would manage to irritate her. I hope you continue to enjoy this fic, and I am so grateful for the review, and I love that you love the way I'm writing Buffy, I try hard to stay in character when writing her.Thank you so much for reading! *hugs*

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2014 - 12:37 pm Title: Riding Roller Coasters and Falling Headfirst

I am happy that she turned Riley down.  The connection between Spike and Buffy is palpable.  Their encounter was desperately passionate.



Author's Response: Passionate is what I was going for, I'm glad it came across that way for you! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2014 - 10:39 am Title: Riding Roller Coasters and Falling Headfirst

Figured Riley was going to fall a little..for Buffy  and that Spike would be upset. 

Good to see that the B/S relationship seems to be more than a claim.. even by Buffy's standards..

Hopefully,  Riley will stay away.  I wouldn't want Spike to hurt him and upset Buffy.

Enjoyed. 



Author's Response: I'm happy to know that you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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