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Reviewer: SoaringClaws Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2015 - 06:49 am Title: Ashes to Ashes

Ooh! The dramatic end of Hank. Good for Buffy running him over with the car. I always support a lady who knows how to use her vehicle as a weapon. 

It's so adorable to see the fallout from Spike rescuing Dawn. He's so upset by the thought of being a white hat, but it's nice that she appreciates what he did so much. I hope they become reluctant (at least on Spike's part) besties.



Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm very happy you liked it. As for Spike and Dawn's little conversation, we'll see if they get closer, not sure if they are going to or not once she learns about what he is. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Diebirchen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2015 - 06:49 pm Title: Ashes to Ashes

Great story, but you need a grammar diction beta: "passed" vs. "past," and the past tense of "drag" is "dragged" not "drug," etc.



Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story! When it comes to editing, I really like doing it myself. As for the word "drug," you're right, it is technically grammatically incorrect, however, if you consider dialect it can be acceptable. I probably should have used "dragged" instead, or another word entirely, but at the time I didn't think about it. Now, "past" and "passed" I believe I used correctly in this chapter. I skimmed over it just to be sure, but if I did make a mistake I'm unaware of, then it's my fault. "Passed" and "past" can be tricky words for me, but I know for sure that "half past five" was correct, unless the sources I read from were unreliable. Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm happy you are enjoying the fic! As for getting a beta, it might be smart, but I just really enjoy writing and editing on my own for now.

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2015 - 03:01 am Title: Ashes to Ashes

Now that was an awesome update.  I love that Dawn really wanted to thank Spike for helping her that night.  He is not used to being on the help end of the stick.  Just too cute.

I hate that Buffy was the mechanism that allowed Spike to find and finally get rid of hank.  I mean even though the man was a vampire he realy thought through how to get to Buffy.  but you have to give it to Buffy.  She was not going to go down without a fight.  She ran that man over with her car and didn't give it a second thought.  I am glad that Spike finally got there and they both know now that Hank can not hurt them any longer.



Author's Response: I am so happy you enjoyed the chapter, and thank you for this lovely review! I didn't plan on killing Hank so soon to be honest, but as I was writing, it felt natural, and like the next good step in the story. Again, I'm so glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2015 - 02:55 pm Title: Ashes to Ashes

Was Hank hiding in the trunk to avoid being a fried vamp from the sun?  If so when did he get a chance to hide in it?  Either way, RIP!

Author's Response: Yes that is exactly why he hid in the trunk. Plus, since he was a vampire, oxygen wasn't a problem either. And at some point when Buffy and Spike were sleeping was when he snuck in, at least that's the way I wrote it to seem. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2015 - 02:54 pm Title: Ashes to Ashes

The constant danger to the sisters and how that is affecting their life and the people around them, really good writing here.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed! And thanks for reading! :)

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