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Reviewer: Glory78 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2014 - 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

plz update SOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Reviewer: mscecilyunderwood Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2014 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter 1

I read chapter 3 and im quite happy with what you tweaked. This time it was equal exposure and youve done a good job by bringing out clear contrasts with the 2 men and womens personalities plus the male ego/hidden competition each had wth each other. Im glad you decided to expound on how xander nd buffys brand of coupling maybe slow and soft but sensual too. Oh i do hope you finish this because ive been wanting to download stories that i enjoyed so much for my private re-reading enjoyment. Ive come or stumbled actually to the spuffy and buffy fanfiction so late, just last year so ive really missed out a lot on good ones. Now im scrambling to read and store fanfiction for strictly my own reading, with permission from the authors of course? Thats me subtly asking you too if you would allow me to store your story/ies btw! Reading fanfiction has been a pleasurable, memorable and learning experience with me so far (buffy fanfiction that is)! Thanks again!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the update. I wasn't too happy with the first draft. I think this expanded one with more detail is more of what I wanted to write. Yeah there is a competition between the been, even if they don't know it. I think after what spike and dawn are doing Buffy and xander deserve their own time. Please feel free to download any stories you want. That's why we authors write. You don't need anyone's permission. My next chapter will continue the flashback of how we got to this night interspersed with scenes from the swap.

Reviewer: mscecilyunderwood Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 06:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Hi Shithappens! Thanks for taking the time to post your reply!

Yeah youre correct that Xander was the one who initiated the strip club visit. Though William took a step even further. Going into a private area, with 2 private dancers is that much much closer to getting burned in the flame. He's really close and in danger of cheating. So for me thats a point against William. Secondly, even Xander noticed Williams act of the private lapdance and for me, the wy you wrote it signified that in some part of his brain, he wasnt as a risk taker as William was. Then he didnt have any second thoughts of going home as I recall after Dawn called.

Hmm, the way you wrote it was that the girls were already noticing how their husbands have roving eyes, even if they dont act on it. And the girls thought about the Vegas trip a bit hard. They even had the talk at the bathroom. So at least on that level, they understood that taking that step would change everything. Oh so if you decided that they secretly desired the other's husband, at least that's the only persons they were secretly wishing for? I dont recall Buffy and Dawn having roving eyes like that of Xanders and Williams.

Anyway,im quite looking forward to your updates. Im bracing myself just in case the falloutof their sexual swapping/swinging proves to be one big 'kerploeey'

Thanks for sharing this with us!

Author's Response: Well, Spike and Xander looked at other women. Men look. It's what they do. Looking isn't cheating. Whereas Dawn and Buffy seemed to have come to Vegas with the idea of swapping spouses.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2014 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good description of the characters. It seems like Buffy and Dawn will go to a strip bar too.

Reviewer: ryan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2014 - 08:26 am Title: Chapter 1

They are going to be very bad. love it

Reviewer: the spikefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2014 - 06:31 am Title: Chapter 1

The ladies are upto something.....

Reviewer: Alexone12 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2014 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved your style of writing. Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Spiky57 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2014 - 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excellent start. Can't wait for more! But don't forget update A night to remember please!!



Author's Response: I'll be updating that in the near future

Author's Response: I'll be updating that in the near future

Author's Response: I'll be updating that in the near future

Reviewer: bad girl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2014 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Are they going to become strippers????



Author's Response: That's a decent guess

Reviewer: color me curious Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2014 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

I wonder what the women are getting upto



Author's Response: You'll find out

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