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Reviewer: shithappens Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter 2

A response to mscecilyunderwood: I don't know how good Xander's behaviour is as he is the one who suggested hitting the strip club. And sure, both Spike and Xander had secret desires in their hearts, but so did Buffy and Dawn. And the women are the ones who initiated it!

Reviewer: mscecilyunderwood Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2014 - 11:31 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh youre so naughty, I didnt expect that! I thought maybe theyd gone to a gay bar or something. But wow, i doubt everything would go smoothly after this. Each of the men secretly coveted the other's wife. Im feeling a bit of bad foreboding if an angsty roadwas what youre heading into. Or a closer relationship between the 4 if you would have them liberal and uber understanding. I do feel strongly though about married men enjoying lap dances like William does apparently. Xander had him beat in behaving so good. William,even though no touching was involved, still has one foot in lusting after women other than his wife. Hmmm, an idea came to me. People say that we always see the grass greener on the other side, right? As in this case, the men both have secret desires nursed in their hearts. Then couple that with the women's comments that so ring true---its hard to maintain ones looks to hold on to ones mans attention. And at times, the efforts werent enough. They would still pant over someone new nd shiny. So why not make it come true? Make them swap wives for sometime? Say a month, 2, 6? Let them see that the saying---you only value something when its gone. In this case, it would be a wake up call to both men. A strong wake up call. Thanks so much for sharing this story! Hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Wow. Great review. Thanks :)

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2014 - 11:15 am Title: Chapter 2

While reading Spike's part in the bedroom, I got the feeling that they would have switched.

Author's Response: Oh darn. I tried so hard not to make it obvious.

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