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Reviewer: Andreparone Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2014 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 4

I think my brain has melted this is so hot!!!

Reviewer: xan1der Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2014 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 4

Spike/Dawn  scene so wonderful especially William close  his eyes  and Spike open it.



Author's Response: We all have two sides to ourselves. Or more.

Reviewer: Glory78 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2014 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 4

Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mscecilyunderwood Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2014 - 09:54 am Title: Chapter 4

I forgot to add that you did a good job too with the spike/dawn scene. William was really into it.

The spike/buffy coupling was forceful but quite short. William was horny but its like hes not really into it, he just wanted to reach his peak and fast, then thats it. Even the way he wanted his wife to finish him off. Sadly, that best described i think the start of buffy thinking about xander.

Xander/buffy was tender and loving but it was sort of ho-hum. it came across as like if it was a contest, the couple who enjoyed having sex so much would be spike and dawn. While xander and buffy came across as. Just sort of testing the waters because it lacked the extra "oomph."

Thanks for sharing this with us!

Author's Response: Aaah thanks for reviewing. I love getting reviews. If you noticed the guys wanted but it was the girls who initiated the swap. And each one is getting exactly what she wants. I don't think the Buffy/xander scene was ho hum. But to each his own. The question is how the guys will react post orgasm. And if the girls can get them to stay.

Reviewer: mscecilyunderwood Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2014 - 09:31 am Title: Chapter 4

thanks for updatingt i noticed on the chapter where william was already having sex with dawn, he was  so affected by dawns body like her perky breast etc even how snug he was inside her. but in the scene with buffy, he was concerned only of buffys perky bottom. it seems to me like he hasnt really liked his wifes body anymore. only her bottom was the only something that he could enjoy about his wife. Am i right in feeling that somehow, william was starting to get tired of buffy and was secretly desiring the younger woman next door? I mean buffy wasnt bad as you described her in the first chapter, so im unsure of the vibe im getting in thiis chapter. Just like in buffys part where you did a good job of describing how she started to think and wished for xander. Then dawn doing the same. Im really looking forward on the fallout of this Vegas swing they had.

Author's Response: No I think spike was so affected by dawn was because he was mid coitus. I think he still finds his wife as attractive as he ever did. Besides it was the taboo nature of the act and the fact that Dawn is a hot young thing that made it so wrong. And yet so right. I think both men have secretly desired each others wives for the longest time. And who can blame them? Men always want the shiny new thing. And women too, I might add. Does anyone think spike and Xander could have stopped?

Author's Response: No I think spike was so affected by dawn was because he was mid coitus. I think he still finds his wife as attractive as he ever did. Besides it was the taboo nature of the act and the fact that Dawn is a hot young thing that made it so wrong. And yet so right. I think both men have secretly desired each others wives for the longest time. And who can blame them? Men always want the shiny new thing. And women too, I might add. Does anyone think spike and Xander could have stopped?

Reviewer: MoveableBeast Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2014 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 4

I love your writing style. Cannot wait for the next installment whatever it is.

Reviewer: Boredstiff63 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2014 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 4

Spike is so hot and Dawn so slutty girl, I could not stop reading! Please, please write more.

Reviewer: NikkiHit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2014 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter 4

Please so sexy need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lollypop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2014 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 4

I enjoyed this arousing story. It was still made me hard and ready for sex. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Hamster Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2014 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 4

You did a fantastic job in my opinion. Your story kept me guessing what was going to happen next, what emotions would come next.

Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Madmax Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2014 - 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

You just keep getting better and better. THANKS

Reviewer: v1221 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2014 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 4

Damn what anybody else says...this was a damn good story



Author's Response: Thanks. I appreciate that.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2014 - 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 4

Now we are getting into the backstory, and sees that they both want to try what the other one has.

Author's Response: That's human nature innit.

Reviewer: SANDRAMUST Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2014 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 4

How many chapters are you planning to write?



Author's Response: I'm letting the story tell itself.

Reviewer: Hamster Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2014 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter 3

Please give more Spike/Dawn smut!!!!

Reviewer: quir Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2014 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

I believed it ! I felt it! Very hot, very arousing and very inspiring. A swapping story of great sexuality, realism and quality. Well done.

Reviewer: Spiky57 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2014 - 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

I am really love Spike/Other sex but Buffy/Other not so much.

Reviewer: layed_back Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2014 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

I really liked this story. Good detail got me very horny.

Reviewer: willow23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2014 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 3

Can't you post these a little faster? This is some great porn!

Reviewer: Jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2014 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 3

The way you've built up to this point, and the realistic character portrayals, makes this story very believable. And for me at least, that makes it MUHC more erotic.

Reviewer: Wolfram Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2014 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 3

Nice work. Hope you do more.

Reviewer: YamiBoy2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2014 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

Just wanted to say that was hot.  Keep up the writing, you definitely have a gift for it.

Reviewer: jpb531 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2014 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 3

So hot!!! shower now...

Reviewer: v1221 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2014 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh can you write more Spike/Dawn in bed o on table!!! Oh forgot  hot tab!!!

Reviewer: xan1der Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2014 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

story !! VERY well written and SO erotic and sensual. Thanks

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