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Reviewer: Savini Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2014 - 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

Spike/Dawn its so hot . but threesome Spike/Dawn/Buffy hottes and without Xander!!

 

Reviewer: Rogueslady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2014 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 3

LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THE SPAWN SCENE! But Buffy/Xander not so much.

Reviewer: SANDRAMUST Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2014 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow... that was hot.. you never cease to amaze me when I read your smut scenes. Very sexy and hot. Need more!!!!!!



Author's Response: Hey thanks, I really appreciate all of you guys writing your reviews. It pumps me up to keep going. Feel free to even give me suggestions for where you think the story will or should go or if you just wanna have a chat. I'm levisobyeah@gmail.com

Author's Response: Hey thanks, I really appreciate all of you guys writing your reviews. It pumps me up to keep going. Feel free to even give me suggestions for where you think the story will or should go or if you just wanna have a chat. I'm levisobyeah@gmail.com

Reviewer: Sallydi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2014 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

Whew! that was hot. good stuff, very sexy!

Reviewer: Wbrcafe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2014 - 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 3

Excellent start. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Billr26 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2014 - 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 3

I can't wait to read more. Such a realistic portrayal of many relationships & people. It had titalating elements, that beg for more graphic detail when the time is right for the main characters.

Reviewer: NikkiHit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 3

Excellent story!!!

I love the way you write, how you increase the level of exciting throughout the story!!!

Reviewer: Lollypop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

That was really good. Enjoyed it very much and thought it was very sexy. It certainly got me hard!

 

Reviewer: v1221 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

I believed it ! I felt it! Very hot, very arousing and very inspiring. A swapping story of great sexuality, realism and quality. Well done.

Reviewer: Madmax Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

So fucking hot need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sandi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 3

Can you write next story spike/buffy/cordy its hot.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 10:36 am Title: Chapter 3

Damn the wickedness of women, what is a poor man to do :D
This is great.

Author's Response: Haha. I know you're kidding about Dawn and Buffy being wicked. They aren't. As you'll see once i get into the backstory of WHY they're here in Vegas and swapping partners. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: mscecilyunderwood Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 06:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Hi Shithappens! Thanks for taking the time to post your reply!

Yeah youre correct that Xander was the one who initiated the strip club visit. Though William took a step even further. Going into a private area, with 2 private dancers is that much much closer to getting burned in the flame. He's really close and in danger of cheating. So for me thats a point against William. Secondly, even Xander noticed Williams act of the private lapdance and for me, the wy you wrote it signified that in some part of his brain, he wasnt as a risk taker as William was. Then he didnt have any second thoughts of going home as I recall after Dawn called.

Hmm, the way you wrote it was that the girls were already noticing how their husbands have roving eyes, even if they dont act on it. And the girls thought about the Vegas trip a bit hard. They even had the talk at the bathroom. So at least on that level, they understood that taking that step would change everything. Oh so if you decided that they secretly desired the other's husband, at least that's the only persons they were secretly wishing for? I dont recall Buffy and Dawn having roving eyes like that of Xanders and Williams.

Anyway,im quite looking forward to your updates. Im bracing myself just in case the falloutof their sexual swapping/swinging proves to be one big 'kerploeey'

Thanks for sharing this with us!

Author's Response: Well, Spike and Xander looked at other women. Men look. It's what they do. Looking isn't cheating. Whereas Dawn and Buffy seemed to have come to Vegas with the idea of swapping spouses.

Reviewer: shithappens Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter 2

A response to mscecilyunderwood: I don't know how good Xander's behaviour is as he is the one who suggested hitting the strip club. And sure, both Spike and Xander had secret desires in their hearts, but so did Buffy and Dawn. And the women are the ones who initiated it!

Reviewer: mscecilyunderwood Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2014 - 11:31 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh youre so naughty, I didnt expect that! I thought maybe theyd gone to a gay bar or something. But wow, i doubt everything would go smoothly after this. Each of the men secretly coveted the other's wife. Im feeling a bit of bad foreboding if an angsty roadwas what youre heading into. Or a closer relationship between the 4 if you would have them liberal and uber understanding. I do feel strongly though about married men enjoying lap dances like William does apparently. Xander had him beat in behaving so good. William,even though no touching was involved, still has one foot in lusting after women other than his wife. Hmmm, an idea came to me. People say that we always see the grass greener on the other side, right? As in this case, the men both have secret desires nursed in their hearts. Then couple that with the women's comments that so ring true---its hard to maintain ones looks to hold on to ones mans attention. And at times, the efforts werent enough. They would still pant over someone new nd shiny. So why not make it come true? Make them swap wives for sometime? Say a month, 2, 6? Let them see that the saying---you only value something when its gone. In this case, it would be a wake up call to both men. A strong wake up call. Thanks so much for sharing this story! Hope you update soon!



Author's Response: Wow. Great review. Thanks :)

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2014 - 11:15 am Title: Chapter 2

While reading Spike's part in the bedroom, I got the feeling that they would have switched.

Author's Response: Oh darn. I tried so hard not to make it obvious.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2014 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good description of the characters. It seems like Buffy and Dawn will go to a strip bar too.

Reviewer: ryan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2014 - 08:26 am Title: Chapter 1

They are going to be very bad. love it

Reviewer: the spikefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2014 - 06:31 am Title: Chapter 1

The ladies are upto something.....

Reviewer: Alexone12 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2014 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved your style of writing. Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Spiky57 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2014 - 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excellent start. Can't wait for more! But don't forget update A night to remember please!!



Author's Response: I'll be updating that in the near future

Author's Response: I'll be updating that in the near future

Author's Response: I'll be updating that in the near future

Reviewer: bad girl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2014 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Are they going to become strippers????



Author's Response: That's a decent guess

Reviewer: color me curious Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2014 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

I wonder what the women are getting upto



Author's Response: You'll find out

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