Date: 01/09/2015 - 11:51 am Title: Short Winter Days
It's been a very long time since I read this - very glad that I found my way back again. This is a wonderful story.
Date: 11/25/2006 - 01:49 am Title: Short Winter Days
This is really heartbreaking-- Buffy's sense of loss is so acute.
Date: 08/21/2004 - 08:12 am Title: Short Winter Days
I wonder were it will go. I don't like B/A that much. We'll see. I don't lost my hope. Cordykitten
Date: 08/20/2004 - 03:06 pm Title: Short Winter Days
I really like the way you are using tense and perspective. I understood who she was with and who she was thinking of in your first chapter, but I like the way you switched the POV from Angel to Buffy in the second chapter. I particulalry like the idea that she sees that he os drifting away because he's becoming too light to stay with her, and that at some point he will inevitably leave, and that's okay. Lovely phrasing and I'm glad you decided to extend the story. Looking forward to more.