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Reviewer: dar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 07:26 pm Title: I'm So Sorry Baby

wondermous chapter again, sweets. I loved it! better than i could have ever imagined

Reviewer: dar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 12:41 pm Title: Maybe Just Maybe

wonderful like always, sweets

Reviewer: amanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 09:12 am Title: Maybe Just Maybe

hi again. i just read my own review and i just releazied i must sound soooo evil!! i'm really not. as far as the abortion thing goes, yeah i would never do it because i don't believe in it. but i can see where shes coming from. yeah, i don't want it to happen but that doesn't mean i'm gonna go all wacky and start hating the story and writing hate mail. no way! this story is farrr too good too hate. ok, just wanted to let you know that. pleeease update!!

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 09:11 am Title: Maybe Just Maybe

OH!!! NO!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE dont make us wait to long........

Reviewer: amanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 09:06 am Title: Maybe Just Maybe

hello again. ooooo, plot twist. evil, evil plot twist. ha ha, i love it! (i gotta have my stories with lots o angst before they reach a happy ending) i'm really loving this story. but i neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed to know what happens. like NOW! well not now because its 5 in the morning but you get what i mean. please update ASAP. this story rules!!!!!

Reviewer: Spike_rulez Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 08:39 am Title: Maybe Just Maybe

Hey! I just read all the chapters and I really looove this story but what you're about to to, the abortion I mean, pleeeeeaaase don't!!! *begging* Even if it is cliché...I would love to see a happy end INCLUDING a baby! Please think about it! Greetz Nadine

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 08:39 am Title: Maybe Just Maybe

I happen to agree with the abortion direction for this story, but you're gonna run into nothing but problems with your readers if you do it. I'm not really crazy about baby fics, because most of them are done poorly. Let's face it, even as a mother of two, I'm still not surehow I would have handled an unwanted pregnancy. Those are pretty big emotions there and not everyone can pull it off.... especially if you've never been a pregnant teen. Another option that nobody mentioned is a miscarriage... of course a this point you're still going to get crappy feeback because the "murder" view so many people (your character included) have stressed feelimg about abortion. Good luck.

Reviewer: amanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 08:29 am Title: Losing Grip

hi. i really like your story so far. i would've reviewed sooner but i like to read a bit before i judge it. AWSOME!! i like the fact you skipped over buffy/ryan. i myself am also impatient and i didn't want to see buufy and ryan happy for too long. thats me for ya. keep it up!!

Reviewer: carrie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 07:51 am Title: Friends? Riiiiiggh

:) ive just read the first few chapters (amd am planning to read all 17 right after this review!). i absolutely love this idea, and i love how you've written Buffy- its nice to see her all happy and bubbly. and usually i absolutely hate characters that are the writers own, but i also love buffys new beau and how they interact. so great job!!

Reviewer: Kerry Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 06:51 am Title: Maybe Just Maybe

I'm not going to jump to conclusions too early.Buffy has not gone through with it yet, I'm hoping to God that she won't.She still has time to change her mind. Great story.Look forward to the next installment.

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 04:34 am Title: Maybe Just Maybe

I had to take a break I was so mad at the direction you have taken this story...I read all the review and out of 14 of them only 1 suggested this direction and everyone else didn't want you to go there. The next time you ask for feedback try and go with the popular response instead of the unpopular one because that will get you ostrasized. just an idea

Reviewer: Tammy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 04:33 am Title: Maybe Just Maybe

I'm sorry, but I don't think that's right. I don't care what the reasons are, I'll never believe in abortion. Buffy needs to realize that even if it's not Spike's he's still there and he would help her out no matter what and that she's not alone. I'm just gonna say that I don't think I'll like this story very much anymore if she decides to have an abortion and it looks like she is. I'll still read it, but I just won't think it's right.

Reviewer: Christina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 04:28 am Title: Maybe Just Maybe

I love this story so much...I have a feeling she won't do it, but I don't see anything wrong with it if she did. Obviously it's a huge personal choice but for the sake of the story, if she does have it, PLEASE LET IT BE SPIKE'S. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2004 - 04:26 am Title: Maybe Just Maybe

so she takes the chicken way out...

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2004 - 08:49 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

Sheezz!!!!! please dont keep us hanging here!!!!!! PLEASE please please pretty please!!!!!!

Reviewer: crenchy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 07:42 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

OK, here's my suggestion. Have her have an abortion. Sure, Spike would have issues with it, but he'd end up supporting her because he loves her unconditionally. 'Cause really, another baby story where Buffy either drops out or becomes the model teen mom and she and Spike live happily ever after after gaining the support of their friends and family would be just that, another baby story. Just my two cents, but I've read enough stories that start really well and then just go all to hell when it becomes a baby story.

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 05:12 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

I suggested in my IM to you that you used if you marry them Hero and if you want to be more original I also want to give you an alternative...Keith Urban's I wanna love somebody like you ...no one uses country and that one is perfect for this fic!I will list the lyricsThere's a new wind blowing like I've never known I'm breathing deeper than I've ever done And it sure feels good to finally feel the way I do I wanna love somebody, love somebody like you. And I'm letting go of all my lonely yesterdays I've forgiven myself for the mistakes I've made Now theres just one thing, the only thing I wanna do I wanna love somebody, love somebody like you Yeah I wanna feel the sunshine shining down on me and you When you put your arms around me You let me know theres nothing in this world I can't do I used to run in circles going no where fast I'd take one step forward and look two steps back I couldn't walk a straight line even if I wanted to I wanna love somebody, love somebody like you Whoa here we go now Yeah, Hey i wanna love you baby Yeah I wanna feel the sunshine shining down on me and you When you put your arms around me Well baby there ain't nothing in this world I can't do Sometimes it's hard for me to understand But you're teaching me to be a better man I don't want to take this life for granted like I used to do I wanna love somebody, love somebody like you I'm ready to love somebody, love somebody like you And I wanna love somebody, love somebody like you (yeah) Hey I wanna love you baby

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 11:56 pm Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

Nope, wasn't expecting that. Looking forward to Spike's reaction and how they decide to handle the situation.Holy s--t! Angel's gonna kill Spike for this!

Reviewer: Essi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 06:33 pm Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

Oooh, unespected to me. I hope the baby is Spike's. Sorry, but I can't offer you help with the future. I hope you figure it out. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 06:06 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

Oh! God that better be Spike's baby! I'd be sad if it wasn't what a careless person buffy is. But then again caught in the moment you cant really do anything about it. Please make it be Spike's I'd so totally worship you if you did! Well not that bad but i really want it to be Spike's. Sides that would be cool cause he could prove himself to Angel and Buffy that he is really in love with her and that he would do anything for her. And angel and spike could finally let the anger they had harbored out on each other! that would be neat! but then it would look good on spike's part too if it wasnt his and Ryan wasnt willing to accept it and leaves buffy alone and spike reguardless takes care of Buffy and the baby as if the kid were his own and have the love and devotion he claims to have for buffy show. But it is your story just like you said you needed help well i provided you with some hopefully it helped. If you dont like my review and ideas its okay! i just thought i'd throw some your way! Update soon

Reviewer: james lee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 06:04 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

really good chapter

Reviewer: Lady Brandywyne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 05:39 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

I like all of the suggestions that have been made so far. Except that I would have Angel be an ass for about a chapter and have Buffy smack him down for it. He's still acting like he should have some sort of say in her life. For the other reviewer, the procedure that she's thinking of is.... and bear with me here, cause the spelling will be all wrong.... called amneosentesis. A needle is injected through the wall of the stomach and amniotic fluid is removed and tested. Paternety can be discovered this way but it's not offten that a doctor will do it because of the risk involved. It's usually only done when looking for genetic anomolies and such, then they will do the test. Some will do it others will not but if you wanted to use it in your story...... There's the info.... at least enough for this type os story. But great story and I'll be looking for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 02:41 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

I know there are paternity tests so you can do that if you want to have that confirm the paternity instead of the baby at nine months...but I like the suspense...

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 02:28 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

excellent update

Reviewer: SassySlayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 02:28 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

OK make it Spike's baby ultimately in the end , but at the moment since she doesn't know have her tell both of them Spike first and explain the situation then as just perfect torture to Ryan have her tell him it could be his !

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