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Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2010 - 01:32 am Title: White lies and consequences

oh god this is awful. i feel like my heart is breaking :(

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 - 12:21 am Title: White lies and consequences

OH I feel so sorry for her. And for him in a way but he didn't have to listen to GIles.

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 04:50 am Title: White lies and consequences

Oh geez. Who do I feel worse for right now? Hmmm tough call, but I think I have to go with William, he got lied to, and he had to break up with her, and he almost had a kid and yeah. Although I do feel pretty bad for buffy.

Looking foward to the next update.

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 03:39 pm Title: White lies and consequences

well great chapter! hope its get better soon i cant wait for the next chapter! update soon plz!!!!

Reviewer: teenuh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: White lies and consequences

MORE PLEASE :] im hooked >.<

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 02:37 pm Title: White lies and consequences

yay for the update. boo for the breakup, but I know it won't be for long since they deserve to be together.

Reviewer: Lyndsy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 07:50 am Title: White lies and consequences

I love this story I truly do but it's getting old the way they keep go together then break up without really doig it!
I'm also afraid at Buffy's lack of emotion after Spike's letter...
Please update as soon as possible!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 04:35 am Title: White lies and consequences

OMG!!!!! NOOOOOO!!!!!! i CANT believe that spike broke up with her. i understand he wanted to protect her and that he saw she wouldnt give up if the were together, but her loves her and they belong together. also i cat believe that giles ansd gunn said those things, they dont understand and i no they want buffy to be safe but its going to kill them both. i love this story so much and am sooooo happy u updated. i really hope everything works out and buffy talks to spike and he explains things. please update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more and see wat happens nexf wiht buffy and spike. thanx

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 03:59 am Title: White lies and consequences

OMG!!! I can't belive he did that!!!!!! I just started reading this today and I have to say that I LOVE it!! I really do hope she doesn't give up, but I must say she's doing some dangerous stuff! I hope it works out well for them.

I can't believe Giles advised him to break up with her and that he listened. Stupid Giled and stupid Spike. Poor Buffy, she just had a miscarriage and now she lost the man she loves. Now Buffy has Nothing to lose and she could become careless. Either way if she's with him or not, she's not gonna stop. I can't believe he realized that too late.

I hope they make it. I really do. Great story so far though! Update soon! I absolutely can't wait to read what happens next! I hope they make it out together! Update soon!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you decided to start reading my story. Makes me all happy. Thanks for you review.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 02:46 am Title: White lies and consequences

I said it in the last review and I'll say it again...If Spike or Giles thinks that Buffy will stop trying to free Spike, just because he has broke up with her..then they are delusional. This is a strong woman..Yes she is feeling low with losing the baby..but she won't stop loving Spike because he asked her to! She is going to meet with Angel and Darla..and she won't stop until she either solves Spike's problem or she has been hurt..

BTW...Happy to see you back with another wonderful update!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 12:29 am Title: White lies and consequences

good update but i hope that he gets a chance to explain to her in the next chapter and gets back together with her

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2006 - 08:24 pm Title: White lies and consequences

No... you made me cry!!
You have to stop that this instant! :D
But all that a side.. loved the chapter!!

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2006 - 07:55 pm Title: White lies and consequences

Ohhh the angst just keeps on coming.....this is such a great story with great characters.

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2006 - 06:44 pm Title: White lies and consequences

That made me tear up.

Waiting anxiously and patiently for then next chapter, I am

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2006 - 06:24 pm Title: White lies and consequences

Now what? Is she going to believe he's serious?

I think it's for the best, as much as it sucks that Spike is in there even though he's innocent. Freedom isn't worth Buffy's life, and she's in over her head.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2006 - 05:44 pm Title: White lies and consequences

If you make another chapter end like this im going to be sending you a bill for all the tissues im going through!!! i loved this chappy cant waite for the next one!!!!

Author's Response: Nope, it should be the last sad chapter. But I could always change my mind, you never know with me. So keep the kleenex box nearby just in case ;) Sorry for the tears, but I can't be held responsible for the stupid things Spike does. The characters live in my head, all I do is type lol

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: White lies and consequences

I can't believe he actually broke up with her in a letter. Buffy won't be happy when she finds out Giles had a part in this. She didn't react the way I thought she would, though. I hope she makes him realize how stupid he's being. They should know that no matter what, she's not going to give up trying to set him free. She's too stubborn for that. I'm still really hoping for a happy ending here. It's hard to tell at the moment. Anyway, I'm glad you updated. Hope for more soon!

Author's Response: Hey, it's Spike and Buffy we're talking about here. Even when they think they thought things through, they still manage to make stupid decisions. They're not dumb, far from it, but when it comes to love, they're a little challenged lol. Don't worry though, things might look a little dark right now, but I don't like depressing endings so...

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2006 - 04:34 pm Title: White lies and consequences

Uh-huh.. Gunn gave Spike the same advice as Giles did.. and now he's writing something? ~ And Buffy intends to go to Darla and Angel alone. This is very dangerous, even if Wesley is near. Oh..and now Spike noticed she lied about that. (The coffee incident with Harm was fun. *g*) The other thing, the letter? That was heartbreaking. And I fear in vain. Because William did it to save Buffy to do something silly. And I fear she won't stop to do it know even if she lost him. And if she does it anyway, going to go to Angel and Darla and find something out, she can fight for him to get him back after she has done it... if she is still able to after that. It will be very dangerous. She even got Willow's name wrong on the phone with Darla.

Author's Response: Poor Harmony, I'm so not nice to her. But I thought the chapter needed some comic relief and she was the perfect victim lol And no, Spike did not take into consideration just how stubborn Buffy is when he decided to write the letter. He'll find out just how pig headed she really is soon enough though.

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