Date: 05/01/2017 - 12:40 am Title: 10
I loved this story until this chapter (10). Dawn being part of Spike??? That just makes zero sense. You have a wonderful writing style but the unexplained (and I can't think of an explanation that would be believable) reveal of Dawn being part of Spike throws everything off and adds an element of absurdity in an otherwise terrific story. This is not meant to be harsh, I'm just a bit disappointed. But, I do love your writing style.
Date: 12/10/2004 - 07:24 pm Title: 10
Love the thought that Dawn is made of Buffy ans Spike :) About Joyce - I frea it will go like in the series (her dying) I just hope that Caritas will help her, too. Did I told you before? I'm glad that the Spuffy angst is over - for now .. Loved ::: They shone with a happiness that she felt sad to have never witnessed before this moment, and she vowed that the sadness that seemed to be completely washed away would never take hold in them ever again:: I hope, too.
Date: 12/08/2004 - 06:09 am Title: 10
love how you are having Buffy heal him...she needs to eat though so she builds up strength and they need to TALk since that was one of their major problem in season 5 and 6...can't for more! will you have Angel help? love how he's being a good guy! would love to see Cordy or Wes!
Date: 12/08/2004 - 05:31 am Title: 10
you write buffy / spike 'hot' scenes so well not too graphic or crude ..just enough to make us want more you write it so it's beautiful and don't go overboard with the 'naughty' language. Thankyou!
Date: 12/08/2004 - 04:21 am Title: 10
whoa! breathtaking sweetie! absolutely breathtaking!
Date: 12/08/2004 - 03:39 am Title: 10
I'm torn between Joyce and her issues and wanting Buffy and Spike to get on with the nasties..sigh..