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Date: 11/20/2013 - 02:58 am Title: Death's pale flag is not advanced there

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Reviewer: Jackie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2005 - 04:49 am Title: Death's pale flag is not advanced there

I do really think your writing is good! I am thoroughly enjoying reading this. I did have one piece of constructive criticism. It seems that you are using the basic facts from the series and just kind of rearranging them a bit. With some exceptions, of course, like Spike and Buffy's growing relationship. I don't really mean that in a negative way, just an observation. Again, I really like the story, and I think you're a very talented writer. One other comment - about Willow: I get the impression that you are mad at her because of the way you are portraying her. I have yet to read all the chapters, so I am hoping she comes back into her friends' good graces later on. It's just that I really like Willow and reading how everyone is so mad at her makes me sad. I know it's similar to what she did on the show, but she had Xander, Tara and Anya to share in the blame in that version.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2004 - 02:45 pm Title: Death's pale flag is not advanced there

The ice pop? Funny. Letting Spike know where she's been? Good, good for Buffy too to spill it out ... Willow? I don't know what she thinks ..

Reviewer: WolfSpider Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2004 - 03:59 pm Title: Death's pale flag is not advanced there

Blood Slurppie now that is just great and so damn funny....Sharing secrets and emotions over ice cream...what can i say brilliance...bringing in the simple but yet it makes it all so damn meaningful....You have created yet another cliffhanger to what will go on next...Gods I hope Tara let's Willow have it...giving Tara more of a voice than she has ever thought she had....Well either way you go will be extraordinary...Happy Yule..Merry Christmas to all and to all a good night

Reviewer: Rana Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2004 - 05:18 am Title: Death's pale flag is not advanced there

gah! so many things in this chapter! where do i start? ok, first - if you're firing some writers of BtVS, can i help? second (this is totally inconsequential to the brilliance of this chapter so I ask it second) - the ice cream that Spike brought up to Buffy, was it Ben & Jerry's? 'cuz if it was, i'm more in love with Spike than ever before. Ben & Jerry's Peanut Butter Cup ice cream is my favorite! third - whimsy and bloodplay? coma & death? i knew that the risks Willow took concerning Buffy, Tara, and Dawn were immense, but i had no idea they were this extreme. i'm impressed that Giles can be around Willow without attempting to choke her. yeah, it's real amusing to have to crawl out your grave. i'm not sure if the bloodplay is going to make an appearance, or if the thing that crawled out and is shredding the bodies fills that requisite. fourth - Dawn's reply to Spike when he asks why she put his blood in the freezer was hilarious! ice pop or slurpee...*snort* i can just see Spike sucking on a cube of blood. *giggle* so gross. i wasn't sure if there was going to be much remarkable humor in this fic, but you have definitely shown you can serve up the humor as well as the angst. fantastic stuff. fifth - Willow and Tara. Tara and Willow. i don't see how this can be fixed. i think Tara is just putting off the inevitable. once the trust is broken like that, to that magnitude, can it be fixed? i honestly don't know. i will be interested to see what you decide. sixth - Willow (so huge a problem she deserves her own number in the rank). i am impressed with the level of denial and hubris you have instilled in Willow. i wonder, do you plan on likening Willow's problems with magic to a drug addiction like the show? the last scene between Tara and Willow certainly had that vibe - an addict begging for another chance. and lastly - Buffy and Spike. Great job gradually strengthening Buffy emotionally. Just really brilliant. Every chapter that passes, I see her get just a little bit stronger. now that she has told Spike where she was, i hope she is able to cope even better. i love how you placed that scene in her bedroom with ice cream rather than in a dank back alley. just the setting of the scene makes it feel like less of a secret that must never be told. it makes it feel like any of Buffy's other confessions told in that room, to either Willow, her mom, or Angel. and Buffy touching Spikes lips...*le sigh* every day Buffy gets stronger and every day they get closer. i love the easy, friendly camraderie you have built. i also like that you have infused the previously existing UST with the friendship. really nice work bringing the humanity of these characters to the forefront this chapter. flaws and all, we love them. and we love you for writing them!

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2004 - 01:54 am Title: Death's pale flag is not advanced there

Great Chapter. Love the story. Please update soon and often.

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