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Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2005 - 04:53 pm Title: To watch the night in storms

Just read entire story up until this point. This is a great story and I have to say I think you read my mind. Not that I could write it myself or anything, but I definitely had a lot of the same thoughts when it came to the story line of BTVS. I can't wait until the next chapter. Thanks!

Reviewer: Grace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2005 - 05:52 am Title: To watch the night in storms

I don't want it to end...I absolutely never want this story to end. so just keep writing for all eternity and the world will make sense. so good, please keep it up.

Reviewer: jodi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2005 - 03:46 am Title: To watch the night in storms

wonderful wonderful.

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 10:24 pm Title: To watch the night in storms

What a great chapter! I love the beautiful relationship between Spike and Buffy and that it all could have developed in the same way from early S6 if Joss and the writers had made different choices. I think it’s great you’ve chosen to have the angst be not between S & B but to come from the others. Can’t wait for Xander to instigate a huge blow-up in the next chapter!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 10:12 pm Title: To watch the night in storms

That was so cute - the little unsure girl in Buffy coming out...
Willow is getting very dagerous -- and Xander is well - Xander.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 07:38 pm Title: To watch the night in storms

Looked for this as soon as I got up this morning and read it again tonight. Love the way B/S are developing. I expect nothing of Xander he's a prat. Looking forward to the big confrontation.

Reviewer: WolfSpider Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 01:30 pm Title: To watch the night in storms

How sweet they were all nice and cuddly in their perspective places and BANG the ickiness came in....Willow being so into her own world did not even notice anyone when she came in just wanted to be in "Willow's World"....And Xander that abysmal ass thinking all goodness with the donuts...I am glad he found Buffy and Spike together serves his sorry ass right....That Damn "spike look" the one that could tear your heart own and make it melt at the same time....excellent chapter....now i believe there maybe some fireworks coming amongst the scoobies

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 03:47 am Title: To watch the night in storms

for whom the bell tolls...it tolls for thee...I love the chapter and can't wait to see how it all turn out!

Reviewer: Rana Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 02:47 am Title: To watch the night in storms

Ho hum, wonderful chapter again. Do you think you could tone down the brilliance just a little? I mean, reeeealy. Dawn and Tara's reaction to Willow's Fantasiafest was truly unnerving. I was hoping you would have them just back out of the kitchen, but wasn't prepared for the hysterical laughing. That whole situation, from Willow not caring how many days she'd been absent to Xander's schooled denial, was just unsettling. Your potrayal of Willow in the kitchen was something that would have played so (no pun intended) magically on the screen. I could just see that whole scene unfold and got goosebumps all over my arms. At this point, allowing Willow free roam over the Summers' household is like giving Maggie Walsh an all access pass to the town of Sunnydale. Who knows what she's going to stick her finger in next? Whereas before she was infuriating and frustrating me, now she is just outright scaring me. I'm feeling the heebie-jeebies right about now. Loved the moment at the end with Spike and Buffy. I'm so glad that the majority of the angst will not be centered on their burgeoning relationship. I'm sure the upcoming talk with the Scoobs won't be a walk in the park, but hopefully Buffy is now emotionally secure enough to face them...I hope? I can't wait to see the big confrontation.

Reviewer: Kate Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 02:08 am Title: To watch the night in storms

I love how all of your threads are coming together. And your Willow is way scarier than the actual one. Her abuse of power and completely lack of ethics is terrifying. Love the Buffy-Spike conversation as well and that he recognized the importance of her question about their relationship and the weightiness of the moment.

Reviewer: SilverCircle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 02:05 am Title: To watch the night in storms

I simply love it! There's nothing more to say for me! :)

Reviewer: Bloodshedbaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 01:56 am Title: To watch the night in storms

*snicker* Xander walked in on them. How bloody PERFECT!!! Fabulous chapter!!I like how Buffy was the one who pushed for the "us", that was so sweet!!!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 01:26 am Title: To watch the night in storms

XANDER IS A JERK. IT'S TOO BAD YOU COULDN'T MAKE HIM MORE UNDERSTANDING ABOUT BUFFY AND SPIKE BUT THAT WOULDN'T BE REALISTIC. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY.

Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 01:02 am Title: To watch the night in storms

Awww, I wish it had gone half this well between our couple on the show as it has here. I love the vulnerable side of Buffy coming through with Spike. Stupid Xander had to run stuff, as usual, but I'm thinking things will go better here than on the show. Lovely new chapter, can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story!

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 12:41 am Title: To watch the night in storms

another chapter from a great writer. willow was something. loved the "mrs.weasley on crack". that was too funny. tara and dawn having to see that...how unnerving for them after everything theyt ahve been thru at the hands of willow and she just doesn't care. xander not having a clue is par for the course but he was deliberate in his "bathroom" excuse. used that to go upstairs to see what buffy was up to. no doubt in my mind that he knew damn well spike would be in there with her. his jealousy is going to get him in big trouble....i hope. "yeah, there is an us"......*sighs*.....spike can read her like no other. bravo, bravo

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