Okay that was just - WOW!
You know I am glad that you keep some things from the series, pretty sure I don't have to tell you which. And I am monumentally glad you changed some others, like Giles finally having a clue that no matter what he wants for her normal just isn't gonna cut it. And Xander gets his smackdown. They really let that character go over the series.
So good stuff and I will move on now to the next chapter.

Wow!
Glad Giles didn't do anything against ... Willow with Xanders - that sounds like troubel ... Buffy and Spike - that was hot!

Guh! *whimper* *sigh* *dies* You killed me with your smutty goodness. Want. More. Very hot how Spike initiated by pulling Buffy's panties away. Niiiiiice. *sigh* This was very intense and gratifying for their first time. I really like how their against the wall position was the same, and yet different, as their first time in "Smashed". Same position, different emotions. Very nice way of mirroring that scene from BtVS and showing us what could have been. I thought it was very amusing how the minute Buffy gets semi-approval from the Watcher she and Spike are bumpin' and grindin'. I know they were building up to this moment long before that, but it's still kind of funny. I can only imagine Gile's face if he knew what happened after Buffy left his presence. Hee, hee! Loved the imagery and shared POV during teh sex. *sigh* I also think the pet names Spike has for Buffy are just precious. He can read her so well, and is giving her exactly the treatment she needs right now. Wow, is he giving it to her. (reverts to jr. high mentality before finally pulling mind out of gutter) Looks like the day patrollers have stumbled upon the dastardly doggies and someone who could be their commander. Ruh roh! Scooby time! Too bad the scoobs are incommunicado right now. I hope the hellhounds don't hurt Dawnie. Really can't bring myself to care so much about Willow or Xander right now. If Dawn gets hurt, that's going to set Buffy back so far. And she's made so much progress up till now, taking control as the slayer in the kitchen while assigning duties. This chapter was brilliant again, and particularly smutacular at the end. I eagerly await the next installment!

That was HOT!

I am glad to see that Giles was truthful in his words to Buffy about her and Spike..then again i sort of figured that was what Giles would say...ok now to the sizzle..that was sooooooooo damn extraordinary....I mean holy shit right there against the wall...all that hottness released and welcomed and just sizzled...sizzled to i can't even think to type that was just so hot...hot digity damn you write good sex...thank you thank you thank you....Ummmmmm can they do it again...*laughs*.....