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Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2008 - 09:36 pm Title: I'll make your heart smile

loved the depeche mode reference, because "in your room" is really what the whole Spuffy thing is about IMHO

Reviewer: F. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2006 - 06:57 am Title: I'll make your heart smile

I'm really enjoying Anya's part in all this. I love it when she shows her age and experience, instead of being just a tactless nympho. She's one of my favorite characters and it's sad that not enough writers play her up well. Thanks for the portrayal.

Reviewer: vampkiss Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2005 - 12:54 am Title: I'll make your heart smile

Lovely, simply breathtaking. Love the sexy Spuffy and the plot thickens with each update. Just loving this story! :)

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2005 - 12:46 am Title: I'll make your heart smile

and meanwhile smutfest goiong on with spike and buffy!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2005 - 10:58 pm Title: I'll make your heart smile

I love yoru writing - this is so good!

Reviewer: shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2005 - 09:16 pm Title: I'll make your heart smile

So good in every way!

Reviewer: jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2005 - 06:45 am Title: I'll make your heart smile

Excellent loved it. Buffy and Spike are in their own little world and it's wonderful.

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2005 - 06:22 am Title: I'll make your heart smile

another great chap :)

Reviewer: Kate Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2005 - 04:57 am Title: I'll make your heart smile

I love you and I love this story, beyond measure! :) It is breath-taking in its completeness and how deeply and fully it explores the storyline and the characters. Plus, those scenes between Buffy and Spike are just hot! *wg*

Reviewer: Rana Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2005 - 01:43 am Title: I'll make your heart smile

Wonderful chapter Nia! Great use of Anya in explaining the balance that Willow upset. I always knew Anya was one smart cookie. She never fails to break out the big insights. I loved Giles' insight into the shift of his emotions for Dawn. Maybe his realization of how much he has to keep safe in Sunnydale will keep him there. I love your Dawn. She is just full of the right amounts of sugar and vinegar. Full of spitfire that one is. Dawn's nicknames for Willow and Xander were hilarious. I'm glad they only played peripheral roles this chapter again. I think we all needed a break from them. And what a break it was! The confrontation between the Huntsman and Dawn was incredible. I cannot WAIT to find out what he said to her. You've really peaked my interest in the background of this character. I'm excited to see what the gang's research shows on this. I wonder if the hounds didn't attack Dawn (even before the Huntsman motioned to them) because she is basically pure. Being the key, she's made of pure energy. If anyone can approach the Huntsman and the hounds, I would think it would be Dawn. I'm really glad you gave Buffy and Spike some more alone time. Buffy definitely needs some fun, stimulating, and relaxing time away from the pressure of the gang. And yummy, lickable Spike is just the one to make sure she gets it. *sigh* Wonderful love scenes between them. The words you choose just weave fantastic images out of thin air. Amazing imagery, especially the last scene with Buffy's hair. That was incredibly sexy. Lovely chapter, again Nia! The more I read of this story, the more intrigued and impressed I am.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2005 - 12:59 am Title: I'll make your heart smile

can i just say..........OH MY GODS. that was some of the best written sex i have ever read. the emotions you brought forth were incredible. dawn having a conversation with the huntsman was not what i had expected and I LOVE IT. he gave me chills. *VBG* i like the relationship you are building between dawn and giles. i found it interesting that you commented about the key and the huntsman. he must have known what she is.......well that my take anyway. i don't like willow and xander commiserating together.....very bad mix there. way to go anya....the girls got some keen observations and shes no dumby!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Ruadh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2005 - 12:49 am Title: I'll make your heart smile

I can understand enough of what the Huntsman says to Dawn to be very inrigued! I wonder if it will be Dawn who figures it out? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: WolfSpider Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2005 - 12:42 am Title: I'll make your heart smile

First off I need a cold cold shower,because that was even hotter sex than the first time around...YEAH BABY YEAH...that does make one Randy....*shew* wipes sweat off her brow...Now how the hell did Dawn know what the huntsman was saying...that girl has powers that have been reveeled yet???? hmmmmmmm....go Dawn though proving that she is not just another teenager...she is special and she knows what she is doing...meanwhile Xander and Willow stood there with their thumbs up their asses not doing a damn thing to help out...go figure....Anya helping put the whole " Willow messed up" idea into perspective...leave it to her to do that...she speaks the truth...thought it pisses the rest of them off...too bad....Finally that last scence....left me breathless and panting and realizing that i need to breath....DAMN you keep doing it just letting it all jump off the screen and into the imagination so that it takes us to that place and that world...thank you thank you thank you thank you....Ok so I am really hoping you are translating the Galic into English because i am super curious as to what the nice man with the cute doggies said *laughs with sarcasm*......BRILLANT again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2005 - 12:28 am Title: I'll make your heart smile

three words: you are AMAZING!!!!

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