[Report This]Date: 07/08/2006 - 02:22 am Title: Shadow on the sun
That needed to be said. About Dawn and Spike. So right you are picking up what the writers didn't. Ahh I'm loving this story more and more. I raised my sister and that really is how you feel.
Date: 01/24/2005 - 01:50 am Title: Shadow on the sun
God, you just amaze me with each chapter. Are you reading my mind because you are giving me all things the show never did or was never able to because it had to take a different direction. (This isn't anything against the way it did go, esp in S6 OR 7, just that you are able to things I don't think it ever could and I like that.) I love your more observey, tolerant Giles too. I think the one thing that got to me the most during S6 and 7 was Giles', in my opinion, character assassination. It's fine that the actor decidede to leave, I don't begrudge him. I just hated how the character's leaving was handled. You are making things right here for me with Giles.
Date: 01/23/2005 - 11:49 pm Title: Shadow on the sun
Gosh, I love this story is every possible way - there are just so many great things going on here, I don't even know where to begin. As always, I eagerly await the next chapter!
Date: 01/23/2005 - 10:12 pm Title: Shadow on the sun
LOVED IT!!! XANDER SHOULD JUST GET OVER IT. IS HE AWARE THAT HE'S DATING A DEMON TOO? ANYWAY, YOU ARE AMAZING. KEEPUP THE GOOD WORK.
Date: 01/23/2005 - 09:11 pm Title: Shadow on the sun
Love the way your story goes so far! Loved the part about Dawn. And I hope he'll claim her ;-)
Date: 01/23/2005 - 09:17 am Title: Shadow on the sun
I'm all on edge now wondering wants coming. How Giles can know from his cryptic conversation with Wes beats me. Update soon I'm gagging to know.
Date: 01/23/2005 - 08:29 am Title: Shadow on the sun
So wish you'd written season 6. LOVING this so much!
Date: 01/23/2005 - 04:37 am Title: Shadow on the sun
It's great the story is moving promptly along, and the family portrayal between Buffy, Spike, and Dawn is really nice. I'm curious as to Wesley's news. Thanks!
Date: 01/23/2005 - 12:57 am Title: Shadow on the sun
oh that was so beautiful. spikes words about how he felt about dawn....*sighs*. i teared up. wait till he finds out the truth....*vbg* we, along with giles is getting a good sense of how things are going in the inner circle. i am glad giles isseeing all this. i am also glad to see buffy becoming more of herself again. thanx spike...*G*. it is good that she went out patroling. i wonder how they will take the news and i can't wait to see what weasley has to say. wow, you are just moving things right along. fabluous chapter
Date: 01/23/2005 - 12:49 am Title: Shadow on the sun
WOW...such tension and tenderness...mmm Giles bringing in another watcher to help out with this unraveling Willow screw up....well well now things should get even more interesting....How insane though that Willow doesn't notice a thing and thinks things are just hunky dorey...ahhhhhh the dumb bitch....Loved Spike giving Dawn that father figure she so desperately needs and needed...And well the hottness that is Spike and Buffy just goes without saying....All will come to a head i am sure and the truth will come out that Willow blew the spell and screwed with the universe and at what price???? more than she knows i believe...Good for Giles taking Spike and Buffy aside to give them information...even though they don't know anything yet...I have a feeling that Buffy is going to be very pissed and wanting to kick some ass....Now the other thing is what is it that the huntsman said...hmmmmm almost worth learning a new language just to find out *grins*...excellent yet again and the sex just keeps getting hotter and hotter...whoooooo
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