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Reviewer: fee_kh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 11:57 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

You know I had wondered how you were going to fit in baby William. I like the fact that you do the courtesy to your readers to figure it out for themselves. Makes me feel all intelligent and stuff.

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2005 - 09:31 pm Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Oh Queen of Evil cliffhangars...I'm on pins and needles waiting to see what Willow concocts - the girl is dangerous and I'm worried ol' Buffy and Spike are going to be in for a rough ride. It's interesting how you're pulling Angel into the mix and what's happened with Darla. Brilliant. :) Absolutely brilliant! :)

Reviewer: zanthine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 11:51 pm Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Really enjoying this one. Anxious to see what Willow's up to, especially to see how it involves Wesley!

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 10:58 pm Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Xander is getting on my last nerve. willow is pissing me off and i'm sure angel is gonna get on my bad side in the next chapter too. It's still a great fic. Please post soon. I love it

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 02:40 pm Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Well...looks like I owe *you* another cliffhanger now. Just wait until I post something... LOL Can't wait to see what Buffy has to say about that last statement of Giles'. And I'm also looking forward to finding out what Wesley's theory is. Poor Buffy having her secret spilled like that, but it's probably for the best. Tara needed to know what Willow really did, even if it was painful to deal with. And speaking of Willow, she and Xander better behave themselves... Great chapter!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 09:19 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Great chapter and good written. And several hints of what to come (maybe). Xander is so blind, following Willow's lead. I'm glad Wes did answer the phone.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 07:30 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Oh this is getting more and more interesting and I hope the payment is a little red head name after a certain tree and misuses her magic.....badly.....bad witch needs to pay...... And when is Xander going to stop being led by his not so nice friend.

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 05:56 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

well I hope you will be a fan of C/A and B/S angst cause this could get fun1

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 04:28 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Wonderful chapter! Great job with the unraveling of Buffy's secret and everyone's subsequent reactions. The intricacies of the plot with the inclusion of the situation in LA and W&X's machinations are quite compelling. More, please.

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 02:52 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

I really like the role you've given Wesley in this fic--he seems to be an outside observer, but he has so much influence on which direction all the action could go. Great chapter! (oh, and you quoted Rush--go you!)

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 01:25 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

I like this much better than the fade out and never discuss again that happened on the series. People should have been saying a lot of I'm sorrys, but they just never did - at least not enough. I liked this much better. And I always wondered why (other than the obvious network issues) nobody from Sunnydale ever knew what was going on in LA... like Darla

Reviewer: Patti Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 12:51 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Wonderful new chapters, Nia! Somehow I had 3 to catch up on! What I get for switching between sites for updates; I miss stuff. So, the secret's out and Willow and Xander are getting scarier....

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 12:43 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

WTF?! Oh boy, oh boy. Darla is still human? She wasn't turned by Drusilla, or died from Syphilis? Damn. Boy does this complicate things. Whooo. As if things weren't complicated enough. Holy Moses. Wesley has found something regarding a "hybrid" being impregnated by a vampire? Not a child being born of two vampires? 'K. I think I've assimilated all the changes. Drastic, revolutionary changes. Holy Crap! This is going to change everything we know. Damn, Willow and Xander called to speak to Angel? That takes balls - to contact the ex for help in removing the only support Buffy seems to want or need during this horrific time for her. I'd really like to smack those two upside the head. Hard. So glad that Dawn shared (tattled) Willow's sordid spying. Spike's reaction to Willow's use of Tara, Buffy, and Dawn (and Willow's spying) was perfect. I'm in Spike's corner. A little vengence on Red would make the perfect appetizer. *licks lips* Xander can be dessert. I'm thinking those playful pups can serve as the first course, followed by draining Red of all her powers as the main meal. *stomach growls* Um, anybody else hungry? Guess I should eat before I review. Great chapter Nia. Loved the scene of Buffy comforting Tara. It mirrored the Buffy/Spike scene in Afterlife, not only in the physical placement, but in the emotional depth of the scene. Really moving hon. So many revelations these last two chapters! My head is spinning with all the dramatic goodness. I love it! I can't wait to see if Wes is able to get ahold of Giles, and if Xander and Willow are able to contact Angel. Oh my goddess! It's like Passions, Sunnyhell style! Simply fabulous!

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 12:35 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

OH hopefully Willow and xander cant do anything to spike and buffys happeniess. hopefully they can solve the problem. Please update soonand often.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 12:35 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

well that was way emotional. it took my heart and tore it up then chewed it and spit it out........damn that was good. those two little peckerheads calling Angel. the nerve, audacity. i had the feeling they would want to pull something to try and spit buffy and spike apart but this, gods. this chapter was behond fabulous and wonderful. it was.......words just can't do my feelings justice

Reviewer: Kate Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 12:32 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Okay, ues, we got some answers and resolutions to certain cliffhangers, but you are so evil, just leaving us with more questions and cliffhangers!! lol Ah! Ah! My mind is all a twitter with the various plots threads happening. I love them all. I am glad, no matter how it happened, that the truth about Buffy's time in heaven came out. And even though Giles was being more Watcher than friend, I like your version of the revelations just as well as the musical. And I have a feeling you are going to have more consequences suffered as well. My only question is the line about Darla being human when she got pregnant. I assume you are following Angel S2 cannon (unless I missed something during my reading so far) and if that's true, then Darla had already been sired by Dru by the time she and Angel slept together. So that statement about her being human isn't true. I just wondered about it is all. Now how long do we have to wait for more? ;)

Reviewer: ace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 12:29 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

STOP with the cliffhangers! Argh, you are killing me here. Each chapter that much more suspenseful than the prior. POST FASTER!!! MAKE IT BETTER, PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: Wolfspider Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 12:24 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

son of (*&^**^^ that was powerful...the way you played each of their reactions to Gile's question and Buffy's answer was soooo right on....Willow and Xander those traitors calling Angel and wanting to enlist his help...ohhhhh so going to hopefully blow up in their faces....damn them both...Wes is going to go gray haired with all this stress sitting on him having so much information and having to be very careful as to what he tells that ass Angel...Oh the fire under the pot is lit and now the boiling is beginning...now let's see who is about to get burnt....Excellent chapter and damn these cliffhangers....*laughs*...

Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2005 - 11:57 pm Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

LOVE how Dawn, Tara, and Giles find out and deal with the fact that Buffy was in heaven - it was just handled so well, Tara's guilt, their anger at Willow - everything. And ooh, Wes in LA finding out about that? Things just keep on getting more intersting! And I'm starting to worry about what Xander and Willow will plan out against Spike...anyway, totally loving this story! :)

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